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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@hallie-jean @e-m-trepke @power
Rinzler and Feather
Rinzler still thought Feather was too trusting, but he went along with the group as they meandered through the hallways.
“Are we really the only ones here?” he asked, looking around. “This castle doesn’t exactly look abandoned.”
“Could be an old World Controller school, like the Sanctuary,”…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
I don’t know. I think they’re about to run into the other group just now, but after that, who knows?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@trahia-the-minstrel @everyone-else this is everyone in the RP and their characters!!
Protagonist Antagonist
@emilysf =Zoe and Milla
@godlyfantasy12 =November, Ara, Lyn, Nyx, and Corvina
@elishavet-pidyon =Viktor, Alyona and Ocran
@koshka =Zlatan and Vulkasin
@denali-christianson = Kilied and Balorico
@keilah-h = Rinzler and…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@hallie-jean @e-m-trepke @power
Feather and Rinzler
“You need food?” Feather asked. “I sorta ran out of rations quite a bit ago, but there’s bound to be a kitchen somewhere.”
“I see you eyeing my discs. Don’t touch them unless you want one to your throat.” Rinzler hissed.
Hesh and Kent stood off to the side, watching.
“Rinzler!” Feather…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@e-m-trepke @power @hallie-jean
Rinzler
“The ‘Dark Player?’” Rinzler eyed the kid dubiously. They looked to be close in age, but that didn’t mean he trusted him. If anything, he trusted him even less than he trusted Hesh or Kent. “With a name like that, if I hadn’t already realized you’re completely foreign, I would’ve thought you were from m…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic I technically count as new in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 5 months ago
Ah, ok. I hope we get SOME answers in this book, even if not all of them!! (I want to know who the last two Black Swan leaders are, and what Mr. Forkle’s original registered name is, etc. heh)
I admire that she isn’t perfect, too! But, sometimes it seems like she’s too imperfect, and comes across as whiny and more immature than she…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic Side Characters (FP,WS) in the forum Characters 2 years, 5 months ago
Well, I hope you find her love here, too, then. 🙂
That is wonderful advice, thank you!! I will definitely use something like what you mentioned, now that you bring it to my attention!
I think sometimes I struggle with finding a different view because I have been relatively unexposed to different views myself, so it…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic I technically count as new in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 6 months ago
ALL the secrets? o.o Now I’m a little more nervous and excited!
I’m not the biggest fan of all the main characters, but they are very good, and it’s really only Sophie I can say I have any real problems with.
I don’t know if worldbuilding is my strongest suit, tbh, but I LOVE it and honestly, I sometimes prefer it to the actual…[Read more]
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E. M. Trepke replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Hesh
Hesh could see the same bewilderment that had once plagued him reflected on this boy’s– Dark Player’s– face. He saw Dark Player’s eye narrow in distrust. That was mutual. Hesh didn’t trust him any farther than… never mind. He didn’t trust this ‘Dark Player’ at all. It was clear that Hesh wasn’t the only one…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic Side Characters (FP,WS) in the forum Characters 2 years, 6 months ago
This is the one about the mentor MC, yes.
I should probably explain a little further.
MC struggled with self-doubt. As a double gifted (and the only one ever), he believes that he has a responsibility to make big changes to the world. But, he doesn’t know how he is supposed to do that, especially since there is nothing really b…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@e-m-trepke @power @hallie-jean
Feather and Rinzler
“Well, you’re a persistent one, aren’t you, love?” The new character smirked.
Feather wasn’t quite sure what to say to that. Rinzler growled audibly.
“All right. I’ll give you a deal. I’ll tell you my name…. if you can tell me where I am.” said the new character.
Feather looked around.…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@hallie-jean Yep, the Tron series is a little-known story, but I love it (actually listening to the soundtrack right now). Rinzler as I have him doesn’t actually appear or exist–as far as I can tell, anyway–in the original movies, but the name “Rinzler” was once another alias for his father, Tron. So my brother (who works on the stories with m…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@hallie-jean Funny story….Rinzler and Feather were both created for fanfictions. Rinzler came from a fanfic written for a series called Tron; he happens to be the son of the titular character. And Feather is actually supposed to be from the Star Wars universe. She and her four sisters were trained in the Republic’s army (three of them, including…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Age Gap in the forum Characters 2 years, 6 months ago
Hey y’all! So, I’ve got a question and wanted some advice! I know we’ve got some romance writers, and while I’m not really looking for “romance” I am looking for some advice and figure some ppl could help me, specifically @gracie-j maybe? GRACIE CAN U HELP ME?
Okie so…before we start here is some disclaimers…
1. What I’m looking for is ad…[Read more]
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EmilySF started the topic Side Characters (FP,WS) in the forum Characters 2 years, 6 months ago
SO, I have two side character (or three) that I need to develop a bit more.
(This is for the story I was asking about the death of a character, if anyone remembers that… the WIP acronymed FP,WS.)
So, the MC has two students he’s teaching.
The theme is about changing the world and how you change the world in a meaningful way.
I already know…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic I technically count as new in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 6 months ago
No, I should have tagged you, and I meant to tag you, but I must have forgotten to reran you after accidentally reloading the page. 🙂
LOL interesting! why the Vatican? And do you sometimes feel that you’re the glue that holds your family together?
The Vatican because: first, I’m a Catholic; second, I’d love to see what all goes on in it…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@e-m-trepke @power @hallie-jean
Feather and Rinzler
“Well,” said Feather, “that was rude.”
“Hmmph,” came Rinzler’s voice. He was still looking in the character’s direction.
“Don’t hurt him, Rinzler.” Feather told him. “That’ll make him even less likely to trust us.” She walked up to the character and stood in his line of sight. “My name’s…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@hallie-jean Feather is a girl; she is sort of tall with blond hair and gray-blue eyes. She wears armor–if you’ve ever seen any Star Wars movies, something like clone/stormtrooper armor but splattered with paint. She wields a rifle.
Rinzler’s a boy. He has dark brown hair and brown eyes. His clothes are black and have light-up orange lines on…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@hallie-jean Maybe my characters could meet yours!
Feather and Rinzler
“Did you hear that?” Rinzler had both discs out, wary.
“It’s probably nothing,” Feather reassured him. They were out of the dungeons, wandering through the hallway again. Hesh and Kent were engaged in conversation behind them.
Suddenly, another c…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
You’re welcome to hop on! I think there’s just eight.
denali-christianson
godly-fantasy12
koshka
emilysf
elishavet-pidyon
Power
Keliah H
SomeoneElse(I can’t remember right now)
There may be some other person(people) but I think that’s it.
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