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Kads replied to the topic Poem Critique in the forum Poetry Critiques 5 years, 6 months ago
@writerlexi1216 Thank youuuuu <33333 (ikr??!?! he’s so cuteeeee) Yes, I like Luma- I’ll probably go with that 🙂 (Yes, they dooooo they’re the best couple ever
reeeeeeeeeeee can i be in their world-) Yay! I will definitely let you know then :3(Yesss, what do you think we should do about contact or whatever? XD
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Alexa Autorski replied to the topic Poem Critique in the forum Poetry Critiques 5 years, 6 months ago
Of course!!! <3333333 Yes, and I adore those names!!! (Koko is so cute, oh my goshh!) Oh, I love those names! Personally, I think my favorite is probably Luma. That’s sooooo pretty, and, I mean, Kodia and Luma sound so adorable together!! *fangirls* Okay, I’ll stop now… I think that’s a good name, but if you’re still…[Read more]
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Kads replied to the topic Poem Critique in the forum Poetry Critiques 5 years, 6 months ago
@writerlexi1216 Awww, thank you again!! XD I’m glad that I was able to show a story through that <3 Lol really?? The boy’s name is Kodia actually, but to me he is koko <3 I’m still considering names for the pixie, but the three I’m leaning towards are Lumenne, Luma, or Aerya/Aera. (Which one do you like most? Do you have any other pixie names?…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 6 months ago
ohmygosh, I looovveee quizzes like this!!!! 😃  I took it and I was Flinn—he sounds really cool, I’d love to read your book and learn more about him!!
who were you? Â (Btw, totally worth spending hours on… 😉)
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Kads replied to the topic For the Poets Among Us… in the forum Poetry 5 years, 6 months ago
A haiku about my new piglet, Saucy!
Piglet on my lap-
I look to your eyes;
Intelligent, brown.
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Alexa Autorski replied to the topic Poem Critique in the forum Poetry Critiques 5 years, 6 months ago
No problem, girl!! 🙂 I’m happy that it means a lot to you, and you definitely expressed the emotion very well!! Oh, I give my characters little nicknames/pet names all the time, and they’ve owned my heart as well, so I totally understand XD) Oh, really??? Yay, I’m so glad, because I feel so connected to these characters and…[Read more]
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Kads replied to the topic Poem Critique in the forum Poetry Critiques 5 years, 6 months ago
@writerlexi1216 Thank you so very much; you have no idea what that means to me. I really tried to express the emotion through it and how the characters felt!! Haha np for having a happy ending, these two deserve it! I could never break their small character bean hearts 💕(yes i love them and they have pet names and everything, these guys are like…[Read more]
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Kads replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 6 months ago
@hallie-jean Thank you SO MUCH, that really brightened my day, girl!!! <3 I am so very glad you like it, so watch out for when it hits shelves 😉 😉 😉 I am so so SO happy and am so thankful for your kind words <3333
@scoutfinch180 Thank you! I worked really hard on it 🙂
@devastate-lasting Awww, thank you so much! That means a lot to me and…[Read more]
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Lin replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 6 months ago
@scripter-of-kingdoms That is absolutely amazing!
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Alexa Autorski replied to the topic Poem Critique in the forum Poetry Critiques 5 years, 6 months ago
Awwww, this was SO SWEET! I love every line of this poem! *heart eyes* And thank you for having a happy ending; I was hoping nothing sad happened because that would’ve broken my heart and I feel so connected to these characters and it just… *inhale* Sorry about that. I just love this so much! I don’t have any critiques, so…[Read more]
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Where do you find motivation? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 6 months ago

That’s awesome:D You definitely will be a professional writer, you are just SO AMAZING at it!!! 😀
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Kads replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 6 months ago
@abigail-m Thank you so very much, that’s exactly what I hoped from it!! <3
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Kads replied to the topic For the Poets Among Us… in the forum Poetry 5 years, 6 months ago
@daisy-torres Well, thank you!! Yeah, it’s true, I think when there’s more emotion and, like, experience in a poem I like it more!
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 6 months ago
That is SO BEAUTIFUL!!! It gives a magical, flowery, mythical vibe and I simply love it! 😀
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Kads replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 6 months ago
@gracie-j Thank you SO MUCH!!! <3
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Kads replied to the topic Poem Critique in the forum Poetry Critiques 5 years, 6 months ago
@gracie-j Awww, thank you! What’s your favourite part of it? <3 🙂
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Kads replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 6 months ago
@writerlexi1216 Okay, I will! Haha, it was pretty strenuous but I am very proud that I managed to get through it. c: XD I’ll do that! <3
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Alexa Autorski replied to the topic Character/Book Aesthetics in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 6 months ago
Of course!!! <3333333 And I can tell you put a lot of effort into it!! Yes, do share!! *claps hands together* Oh, I totally get you–you deserve a well-deserved break XD Just take it one at a time! You’ll get there! *fistbump*
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Kads started the topic Poem Critique in the forum Poetry Critiques 5 years, 6 months ago
Hey, everyone. I wrote a poem called “Forever Perfect” and would like some feedback on it… let me know what you think in all honesty! Dark chocolate style! Be ruthless.
Forever Perfect
The pixie child went out to play
Betwixt the grass and trees one day
With the wind at her back, and soft earth underfoot
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Kads replied to the topic Ultimate Alpha/Beta Reader List in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 6 months ago
I know I’m younger than everybody else here, but I’d love to beta read for you guys! I want to help y’all and make friendsssss <3 ^_^
Name: Grace
Experience: Not very experienced, but I’ve done short story critiques, etc. before. I’d love to help you by being a reader, though!
Style: I can be any. If you don’t care,…[Read more]
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