Jean Coul

@hallie-jean

This is the one about the mentor MC, yes.

I should probably explain a little further.

MC struggled with self-doubt. As a double gifted (and the only one ever), he believes that he has a responsibility to make big changes to the world. But, he doesn’t know how he is supposed to do that, especially since there is nothing really b…[Read more]

@e-m-trepke @power @hallie-jean

Feather and Rinzler

“Well, you’re a persistent one, aren’t you, love?” The new character smirked.

Feather wasn’t quite sure what to say to that. Rinzler growled audibly.

“All right. I’ll give you a deal. I’ll tell you my name…. if you can tell me where I am.” said the new character.

Feather looked around.…[Read more]

@hallie-jean Yep, the Tron series is a little-known story, but I love it (actually listening to the soundtrack right now). Rinzler as I have him doesn’t actually appear or exist–as far as I can tell, anyway–in the original movies, but the name “Rinzler” was once another alias for his father, Tron. So my brother (who works on the stories with m…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 Age gap of four years? Not a problem. My parents are six years apart. The pairs in my stories tend to be mostly around the same age, but as long as they’re not like, an old character paired off with a teenager, I think it’s fine.

@hallie-jean Funny story….Rinzler and Feather were both created for fanfictions. Rinzler came from a fanfic written for a series called Tron; he happens to be the son of the titular character. And Feather is actually supposed to be from the Star Wars universe. She and her four sisters were trained in the Republic’s army (three of them, including…[Read more]

I have written a short story/novelette with a tragic ending. At least, I’m pretty sure it qualifies as a tragic ending, but it is more of a poetic justice sad ending.

The story end with a pirate captain’s 4 year old daughter getting amnesia and disappearing, and him getting super depressed and drunk, but at the very end he decides to go looking…[Read more]

@unsung I realized I forgot to answer a question so:

And do you sometimes feel that you’re the glue that holds your family together?

I sometimes feel like I’m the one keeping lots of things in order, in my family. I have seen that when I don’t do the dishes or skim the milk, no one does, so it doesn’t get done, so things back up, and conside…[Read more]

@unsung

No, I should have tagged you, and I meant to tag you, but I must have forgotten to reran you after accidentally reloading the page. 🙂

LOL interesting! why the Vatican? And do you sometimes feel that you’re the glue that holds your family together?

The Vatican because: first, I’m a Catholic; second, I’d love to see what all goes on in it…[Read more]

@e-m-trepke @power @hallie-jean

Feather and Rinzler

“Well,” said Feather, “that was rude.”

“Hmmph,” came Rinzler’s voice. He was still looking in the character’s direction.

“Don’t hurt him, Rinzler.” Feather told him. “That’ll make him even less likely to trust us.” She walked up to the character and stood in his line of sight. “My name’s…[Read more]

@hallie-jean Feather is a girl; she is sort of tall with blond hair and gray-blue eyes. She wears armor–if you’ve ever seen any Star Wars movies, something like clone/stormtrooper armor but splattered with paint. She wields a rifle.

Rinzler’s a boy. He has dark brown hair and brown eyes. His clothes are black and have light-up orange lines on…[Read more]

Hesh

A young man— a boy really— tumbled into the passage through a window. Like Hesh, the boy wore an eye patch.

Kent growled, Feather’s eyes widened, and Rinzler confronted the character.“Who are you?” Rinzler demanded.

The boy looked wary and weary, ready collapse from lack of water. Hesh handed him his waterskin. “Here, drink this.”

@hallie-jean Maybe my characters could meet yours!

@e-m-trepke @power

Feather and Rinzler

“Did you hear that?” Rinzler had both discs out, wary.

“It’s probably nothing,” Feather reassured him. They were out of the dungeons, wandering through the hallway again. Hesh and Kent were engaged in conversation behind them.

Suddenly, another c…[Read more]

@kathleenramm A lot. Well, not sure. Most of my endings are bittersweet; in fact, I can’t think of a single fully happy ending. But there was one story (that I think you’ve read?) where every single character loses everything and there’s no way to recover that, and it was the result of all their own choices throughout the story.

Still one of my…[Read more]

Nope. Not yet. Bittersweet ending to an arc, maybe. Tragic and possibly hopeless ending, no. I’m really not that kind of person. I’ll give a character a sad death, let’s say, but not necessarily one without meaning. The tragic stories I do have end with the character surviving, or getting another chance, etc.

(*screams at KP forum* Nothing personal, I just don’t enjoy my posts being swallowed.)

This is all over the place, because so it Bust.

Doris (the character this is for) is the head of the council of Bust, and appointed leader of the many variant-constants for the various Bust districts. She renamed herself for easier distinction between…[Read more]

I give up. I’ve tried posting so many times today, and I just give up. I have lost, like, five, and I don’t know why and I just give up.

*screech* what is up with the KP forums swallowing all my posts?

@godlyfantasy12

Zoe/Snow

I’m sorry. Sorry. Sorry.

Her thoughts ran on repeat with the memory. The memories. She wanted to slip back to the innocence of Snow, the purity and simplicity of that side, but the guilt and memories dragged her back and pinned her just like Malcolm’s two assistants always did.

She couldn’t escape, no matter how hard…[Read more]