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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Kad
The smallest ones were Quilanans. Okay. He’d never heard of them, but at least now he knew what they were. (How tall are they exactly?)
The other two were…..humans, apparently. He’d seen a few of their species before, running around below the feet of dragons in the Concordia marketplace, but he’d never talked to them…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Church was great!
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
Crosshair
He watched as another fight ensued. Why was everyone in this castle so hostile? The first time around, most of them had been friendly.
Then he looked down at his hands, and the Firepuncher (sniper rifle) he was holding, and remembered how several years…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 I’m here, but only for a few more minutes.
@freedomwriter76 @loopylin Either of you want to do your characters? Mine just asked them what planet they’re from….
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Feather and Crosshair
Great, more bullies.
At least these didn’t have wings, which meant people were much less likely to get yeeted into a wall…..
Feather didn’t even have time to speak to the boy–Paxton–before they showed up. Sent the biggest boy sprawling on the floor.
The…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 Nice characters!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Crosshair
“I’m sure you’re both glad you met.” said the boy–or really, the young man, not too much younger than Crosshair himself.
Feather happened to overhear. “Ha! He used to act like he didn’t care. Now his family takes up half his thoughts.”
Crosshair shot her a glare, although…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Ok, I see. Poor Paxton!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 Ok! So they’re not too young. I was thinking they were mostly teenagers for some reason……But thanks! Now I can portray them more accurately in my head…..
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Paxton likes to paint?? Feather does too! Maybe one of them will notice that. Feather’s armor is speckled with quite a few paint flecks……
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 I’m on!
Crosshair
“Where are you from?” one of the boys asked. (how old are they? I know they have to be younger than he is, but….)
Should I tell him? He’s not going to believe me, Crosshair thought.
Although there was one part of his brain that remembered the previous time in…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic WIP AUs in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 Can I just say I love your switched AU’s?? The pictures you’ve found for your characters are amazing!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
Feather
She awoke with a groan. That winged creature had thrown her into the wall…..hard. What a bully!
“Is she all right?” came a couple of voices. Young voices.
“She’ll be fine.” replied Crosshair’s voice. She was glad the winged ruffians hadn’t hurt him too badly.
Feather…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon @koshka
Crosshair
The other creature was on him in an instant, dagger raised, knocking the rifle out of his hand.
Crosshair dodged a stab at his face, which sliced back open an old scar on his cheek that he’d nearly forgotten he had.
That hurt.
He slammed his fist into the crazed c…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 Oh, yes he did. Sorry Aramis….if Crosshair were any closer he’d rip you to shreds.
Or maybe the guy deserves that???
Crosshair
Feather slammed into the wall, hit by one of the creatures’ wings. She fell, unconscious.
Crosshair’s eyes directed to the one that did it in milliseconds. The other had sent a…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@godlyfantasy12. @freedomwriter76 is right, that is a great picture! @koshka. @elishavet-pidyon @loopylin
Do you all mind if Crosshair and Feather notice the fight going on? They’re going to want to join in and protect Paxton (at least Feather will, Crosshair will probably just stay in the shadows at first), so I’m not sure if you’re going to…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
He’ll find something else to do as soon as he notices they really don’t care. Or you can have them be like “yeah we don’t care about you” after ten seconds…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 They can just ignore him…..
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
They don’t have tails right? I didn’t think they did; most fantasy humanoids don’t.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Okay then. @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @koshka
Kad
Two creatures were standing there, muttering in a sort of cruel tone. Wait…were they dragons? CloneWings, even?
No, they weren’t. Their wings were feathered. And he couldn’t see their tails.
He grabbed a burnt-out torch from the wall and re-lit it with his…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@Godlyfantasy12 Ok then! I can see him mistaking them for his kind and then getting closer and being like “WHAT THE STARSHINES ARE YOU???”
Would they mistake him for one of them? Or not? His wings are more scaly, not really feathered. And he has a tail. But from a distance, his spikes MIGHT look a tiny bit like feathers…..
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