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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
Umm…the drawing’s severely glitched. I can only see loads of text lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@rae wow…..
getting a little worked up there
However, I don’t blame you for not wanting to add him in if he’s that overpowered. My question is, how exactly do the characters in your story get close enough to beat him, if like you said there’s only one being (besides God) who can do it? Like I can see Alpha going there by himself to fight, but…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
oh, and thanks! I have a lot of really cool dragon ideas.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
@evelyn-collins ah ok makes sense
so what canon events did happen? Like obviously Crosshair joined the Empire, the rest of the Batch are probably doing mercenary missions right now, etc….
So would you say this story happens in roughly season 1’s, 2’s, or 3’s place on the actual timeline? I’d go for 2 maybe if we absolutely had to quantify it,…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@mineralizedwritings wow…..
Nice snippet!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
OUR brave sharpshooter boy lol.
Since you’re writing so much about him, he’s yours also.
ok off topic, but when you finish that picture of Markus, can you show me? He sounds like a really cool character, and I love his name!
As a dragon-person like the ones in my fanfics, he’d be awesome. Phee is a color changing, venom-spitter dragon…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed Hans whyyyyyyy
so actually, thanks to Hans’ complicated backstory, and a few story clues from his canon universe, I’ve begun rethinking my fanfic villain, Hemlock.
He’s totally evil, through and through, and under practically no circumstances will I ever feel sorry for him, but I wonder how long, exactly, has he been the way…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@jonas Yeah, it’s less about the time period and more how they’d recognize him. Snake has quite a lot of fame in the dragon world in the future–he’s effectively the Hercules or Achilles or any other mythical hero of the dragon world. Like, several characters of mine use “Snake’s teeth” as an expression.
So I would do it, except it’d be a little…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
@evelyn-collins cool beans, is he in the story? probably not because the timeline wouldn’t match up no matter how you tweaked it. He’d always end up like 15 years younger than Leo lol
But you can always make a different AU for him to inhabit. Maybe one where tech never died? Maybe he was just hurt or something? (My profile pic depicts him as a…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed My brother plays a WW2-themed Roblox shooter game which has the Battle of Castle Itter as a map in it, and I think he says he likes playing there. That’s how I know about it lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
@evelyn-collins I haven’t yet, but I should soon!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@annabethkatherinewingfeather I haven’t watched the show yet, but I want to.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Yep, a villain from my group would be hard.
All the good infiltrators are not from Snake’s time period. And of the ones that are, he’d recognize many of them instantly. He’d also recognize his traitorous brother.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed just read the bit about you publishing your book! That’s amazing, and I hope I’ll be able to get it when it comes out!
And I’ll probably write a few fanfics inserting characters of my own
(or “borrowed” star wars/marvel/whatever characters hehe)into it lolbut that’s how you know I love a story, when I write fanfictions…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed my characters aren’t up to anything right now. Since it’ll be the next day I’ll rp as them getting to breakfast or something.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed I’m glad he won’t be like this forever…..I’d be heartbroken for a character who is….
and no I don’t necessarily like writing trauma either lol. But it exists, especially in characters who’ve gone through a lot of war in their lives. So yeah I’ll willingly sacrifice a good part of a character’s life so they can have it…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@annabethkatherinewingfeather I have the Wingfeather Tales!
I had a serious problem with The Places Beyond The Maps though. It wasn’t anything against the story or anything. What I didn’t like was how he kept using run-on sentences. Like ten whole lines of text could be one sentence sometimes. The story was very enthralling (and no I don’t have…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Andor isn’t very dark from what I remember, if by “dark” you’re referring to creepy stuff/magic-type stuff. The one scene I had to skip was in episode 2, I believe. Everything else is mostly implied–for example, a character gets mentally tortured and is really messed up afterward, but I don’t think they show it on screen. A…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@mineralizedwritings The prequel trilogy and sequel trilogy are both ok, I guess, the prequels being quite a bit better. I, personally, prefer the shows, but pretty much all of them are on Disney+.
Mandalorian is great, but I feel it’s a bit overhyped. Don’t get me wrong, it’s amazing and deserves all the love it gets, but it’s also merchandised…[Read more]
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