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@highscribeofaetherium whoa, really nice!

@elishavet-pidyon Is he based off the book description? Looks great!

@rae oh that’s cool, even if you do decide to change it.

@ellette-giselle haha that’s horses for ya, isn’t it?

@theducktator bruhhhhh

@theducktator

take my advice.

Don’t.

It’s a hundred times worse than you think.

I looked it up cause I was like “Okay, what is it about this story that everyone hates on? Surely it can’t be as bad as my halfbaked writing?”

I was wrong.

It was infinitely worse.

My characters have been vindicated and I will never call their relationships cringey again.

hopefully you guys find this funny:

those are trashy ship names for Crosshair/Feather and Huntress/Sniper but whatever, they get the point across

@ellette-giselle you’re very welcome!

@rae very cool! What’s his name?

@rae haha didn’t mean that lol

@ellette-giselle ahhh ok. I can understand a character messing around with your thoughts. Happens to me all the time lol

and I can agree with the “solid reason to die” thing.

oh and Aaron and Sabina’s scene at the end was really sweet!

@ellette-giselle ok this is kinda random but Rory’s thoughts made me think of something: in one of my sci-fi WIPs I have creatures called Changelings, who are basically humans but have the ability to change color and disappear from sight. The way Rory describes himself as wanting to disappear reminds me of my Changeling character Jaylen talking…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed ooh interesting! That sounds really fun.

Sadly I don’t know all of the LOTR characters well enough to add to this debate.

@linus-smallprint bruh I guess not

@ellette-giselle

on-slot

It’s actually spelled “onslaught.”

Also this new thing with Noah is very interesting! While I wouldn’t mind him dying if it furthered the plot, I honestly don’t think you should just kill him off for shock factor and “no one will ever know what happened because he’s…[Read more]

when I realize that only applies for this one specific type of plug outlet:

@theducktator here’s another one from him:

“Maybe plug outlets smile when they’re in the factory, but they frown when they realize their life purpose is to be shoved in the face.”

“In the veggietales universe, is being sent to the cutting board a criminal sentence?”

–my brother and his slightly disturbing thoughts

@linus-smallprint A little weird that the lyens would entrust the naming of their young to a species they think is inferior, but at least it makes sense now.

and yeah, judging from what I’ve seen on kentor names so far, Anamyth and Opitarus make sense too. I can’t tell on Iskyagus, but it seems like he should probably be a kentor as well, or some…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed cool, I’d love to see it once you’re done!

i’ve only made progress on one fic for the past 4 months lol

@ellette-giselle cool! I’m assuming he’ll be an important character later on in the plot then?

haha my dad showed me that one a while back ago

a character in one of my stories actually took out a bear using that method

of course, it was a young one just out of adolescence, but he didn’t know that and thinks he’s good at beating bears.