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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@linus-smallrpint Is there a reason for that?
Cause I remember Oliver saying the gorb species was “savage” compared to the lyens, who from your reading seem to be pretty civilized. But I’m also not inclined to trust the lyens’ rating of an enemy’s civility, so.
But that makes me think. Maybe there should be other books set in this…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@linus-smallprint you’re welcome!
by the way, will we ever see more gorbs? I kinda miss your humorous Australian lizard people. (you somehow struck everything I like with that one lol)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@linus-smallprint I love that drawing of Tyn! She’s a good balance of humanoid and animal. I like it when authors do that.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@koshka bruh
First off, that’s one quarter, not one third, second, why did they have to put “60 million” and “20 million” twice?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@linus-smallprint interesting! So his mother is probably trying to get him to use his magic. Why has she not gone more or less crazy like the other wizards yet? (Or has she and we just haven’t seen that yet.)
Why was she in the form of a crow instead of being half human? Did she use more magic than her husband and son or was it something else?…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@freed_and_redeemed that’s awesome!
where and when exactly would this take place? (I know it’s a fantasy world, but the names of your characters are making me curious as to which cultures they’re based off.)
@ellette-giselle I’m pretty sure that’s not her actual attire, so it’s not too big of a deal for me. That image looks more of a…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Rainbows, unicorns, and random questions in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 month, 3 weeks ago
well, I guess they’d probably use it as padding around the places where armor chafed or had a chance of knocking around (say, under the arms and thighs, and on the helmet and shins). Ancient soldiers used sponges to pad their armor. I’m not so sure what medieval ones used, but if they’d have discovered bubble wrap I’m sure they would’ve…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@the_lost-journal nice gun! where are you getting all these weapons?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@the_lost-journal haha that little guy is cute!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Contemporary writing in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@theshadow I can’t help but snicker now every time I read that you’ve replied to something I’ve said, cause that implies you’ve read it 😂
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@hybridlore I don’t WANT you to beat him up specifically.
I just want you to challenge him, like any good character.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle I live in Florida! There’s like 0 mountains here! And barely any fields that aren’t either dangerous-insect-infested or wet and full of either alligators or the deadliest bacteria and amoebas out there.
NGL Florida is micro-Australia when it comes to that area of life.
My brother has two airsoft guns, but we…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle let me think……
I think it’s closer to ten actually.
It’s not so much the count as how close they are to each other. And everyone being dramatic about them, although that part isn’t exactly your fault lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Also, I like the bonus section!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle how many?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle well I walk on the treadmill on Wednesdays when my family goes to the rec center for my brother’s tae kwon do classes, so there’s that.
I also ride a bike and consider myself decently good at it, and rarely go fishing.
But my favorite sport is going outside with a net and catching anole lizards. No one counts that as a sport…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle hey! don’t be like that, we can’t all be murdering a character every 10 seconds.
lol in case you’re wondering this is a joke, I’m not actually offended.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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