Jean Coul

@keilah-h @e-m-trepke @power

Okay then… 🙂 I might as well just add both of the charries because I’m interested on how they’ll all interact with each other. If it gets to be too much, I’ll take one or two out!

So there’s Molly, who’s a runaway slave and has a fake/mechanical leg (made by Everett) that extends from her right knee down. She is…[Read more]

@keilah-h @e-m-trepke @power

So… I have two other characters that I’d like to add because they could really use some character development, but I didn’t know if that would be too much…

I could take out my character I have now (Everett) and replace him with another. Or I could add both… I didn’t know what ya’ll thought. I just didn’t want…[Read more]

@keilah-h @e-m-trepke @power

That’s kinda funny–not really, being sick is not fun–but I was also sick last week. Glad to hear you are better! Also, I just thought it was amusing that you guys call Everett, “Dark,” to shorten his alias sometimes because he hates when people give him nicknames. 🙂

Anyway…!

Everett

He side-glanced his…[Read more]

@keilah-h @power @e-m-trepke

Apologies for the late response! My cousins were visiting all week! 🙂 I’m going to assume it’s alright if I take a turn since no one else has yet!

Everett

An ice crystal slid down his sleeve and fell to the dirty tile beneath his feet. The room their group had evacuated into was significantly warmer than the…[Read more]

@e-m-trepke @keilah-h @power

Everett

When Hesh reached for his dagger, Everett did the same. These “statues” were strangely placed, almost strategically.

Whoever had placed them, had been expecting guests.

He clutched his dagger, trying not to shake too hard, and followed the group deeper into the freezing corridor. The animals were growing…[Read more]

@keilah-h @e-m-trepke @power

Everett

He was about to ask why in the world they wanted to entering a room covered head to toe in ice. But Feather had said in her world, they stored food in machines like this to keep them fresh. Brilliant! Perhaps they’d find something to eat..?

All his hope evaporated as he followed the others through the large…[Read more]

@e-m-trepke

Would you like to go next??

@elishavet-pidyon

Ah, alright! 🙂

@keilah-h @e-m-trepke @power

Everett

Everett worked his jaw as he weighed his options. He was starving and dehydrated, and exhaustion was creeping up on him. Perhaps this was one of those times it didn’t matter whether he could trust people or not. Did he have a choice?

He tried to remember whether he had left a dagger in his satchel or not,…[Read more]

@keilah-h @e-m-trepke @power

Sorry for the late response!!! 🙂

Everett

“Judging from your question,” Feather asked, “you don’t happen to be the castle’s owner or know who it is?”

Everett forced himself to stop glaring at Rinzler and look at the girl instead, but the guy’s grouchy voice still rang through his head– if I hadn’t already re…[Read more]

@emilysf

Wow! That’s such a cool idea!

I wish I could help more but I just don’t know how! I feel like I would need to know more about the twins and how the actual magic system works with the whole “opposites and double gifted” thing.

I’m still trying to figure out how to display the themes in my book, but one of the best pieces of advice I’ve…[Read more]

@keilah-h @e-m-trepke @power

Yay! Another character! Can I have a brief description?? It sounds like maybe another character from the Star Wars universe, but I could be wrong..? Also, I like the mysterious ‘dark past’ vibes!

Once again, I mean no disrespect! I apologize for my character’s attitude, and I think you guys’ charries are awesome!…[Read more]

@emilysf

Well, I guess I shouldn’t say all the secrets, but hopefully more! There is supposed to be a tenth book that I think will be the last one…

Sophie isn’t my favorite either, but I definitely admire that she isn’t perfect. I think that makes her realistic. My favorite character is Keefe! 🙂

Yes! I’m finding out the more I build up a…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Oh, that’s such a smart idea! 🙂 I’ve heard of Tron before but have yet to actually watch it!

Everett

Their worlds? Different worlds? Several worlds? Different universe? Worlds converging? 

Everett tried to keep up his smirk, but with every word this girl–Feather–said, he felt the corners of his mouth drooping more and more. H…[Read more]

@emilysf

Hmmmm…. I like this topic, first off, because I also have some underdeveloped side characters, so I can relate.

Because of that, however, I may not be the most helpful, but I will try to offer some advice. I also think I remember you referring to this story about the mentor. But I don’t know much more that that so just keep that in…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Oh! So you write fanfics???? Cool! I’ve never really dabbled in it myself but enjoy reading them! The one about Feather and her sisters sounds really interesting! I thought you had mentioned Rinzler was from Voltron at first instead of Tron and I was like, I’ve never heard of him XD