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Euodia replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
*gasps*
I love this idea!!!
That would be so hard for a mother thought to see her son go through all of that. 😭 And Bucky, after thinking she died, sees her again?? AH my heart.
But now I can see her just be such a mother to all the broken Avengers
YES!
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Loopy replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 2 years, 12 months ago
There! Finally! It posted!
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Loopy replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 2 years, 12 months ago
Part 3:
However, I think the reveal would be a lot more powerful if you set us up for it earlier on in the chapter. I didn’t know before hand that he always had his helmet on. I kinda just imagined him as a normal dude with a normal human face. I think including a description of him, his outfit, and especially his helmet, and then mentioning t…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 2 years, 12 months ago
Part 2:
Those eyes had looked straight into his own, those black pupils, red irises and… red sclerae. How could someone of man and elven lineage have such eyes?
This is a really cool reveal that I did not see coming. Now Nahim has suddenly become a lot more interesting and I’m excited to learn more about him.
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Loopy replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 2 years, 12 months ago
Ughhh the part 2 won’t post
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Loopy replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 2 years, 12 months ago
Part 2:
Those eyes had looked straight into his own, those black pupils, red irises and… red sclerae. How could someone of man and elven lineage have such eyes?
This is a really cool reveal that I did not see coming. Now Nahim has suddenly become a lot more interesting and I’m excited to learn more about him.
However, I think the reveal wou…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 2 years, 12 months ago
Um this post isn’t working so I’m going to send it in two parts to see if that helps.
Part 1:
I’m still only halfway through chapter two. Haven’t really found the time to read the whole thing though. But anyway here’s some thoughts:
This chapter is a lot easier to read for me since it’s no longer in italics and I hope you keep writing it…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 2 years, 12 months ago
@rea
I’m still only halfway through chapter two. Haven’t really found the time to read the whole thing though. But anyway here’s some thoughts:
This chapter is a lot easier to read for me since it’s no longer in italics and I hope you keep writing it that way. There’s obviously nothing wrong with using italics. It kinda looks cooler, actually.…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Inktober Snippet Series: House of Nelindar in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 12 months ago
Finally finished reading! I’m loving the characters. That last one with the toad was adorable.
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Esther replied to the topic ✨ WIP Rant Chat!!! ✨ in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
Oh and if you want to know spoilers, I will gladly indulge. XD Plus, Amir has a love interest if anyone wants to hear about that… 🥰
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Esther replied to the topic ✨ WIP Rant Chat!!! ✨ in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
Arsyn Dabir’s moodboard…

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Esther replied to the topic ✨ WIP Rant Chat!!! ✨ in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
Amir’s moodboard…

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Esther replied to the topic ✨ WIP Rant Chat!!! ✨ in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
@euodia-vision @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009 @rae @spinner4him @smiley @grcr @hybridlore @whalekeeper @anyone-else-that-might-be-interesed
Ok… I’m so excited because I’m finally sharing my WIP idea for NaNo!!!
I think it’s the only WIP that I’ve actually put a lot of thought into before actually…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 12 months ago
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
I put it in as my cover photo and it looks AWESOME!!! Thanks!
I had to take a screensnip of the part I wanted because it auto cropped it to the part with the bloody hand and it looked rather gruesome XD
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 12 months ago
Woah I love it! My boi Ruebsy!!
Also I need to save that bottom left crying drawing for reference XD I have a hard time finding good poses for people crying because if you try to look them up it’s just a bunch of weird stock photos of people making sad faces 🤣
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 12 months ago
Thank you so much!! So gald you like him! His face actually looks better in person, but the light is glaring in the picture XD
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
Yw!
Also, I finished watching civil war! It was really good, but tbh I think spidey didn’t fit the tone ;(
The final battle was epic
Do you think I should go straight to the infinity saga, or is it necessary to watch avengers 1 and age of ultron first? I know their basic plot but haven’t seen them.
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Esther replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
Ooooh, what is this NaNo WIP???
Wellll…
I won’t explain it all now because I’m planning to share more about it later today. So I’ll tag you then. 😊
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Esther replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
Oh yeah, that’s a really good idea! I’ll have to keep that in mind. 🙂
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