@gwyndalf-the-wise
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Gwyndalf the Wise posted a new activity comment 1 year, 7 months ago
I like it, but it reminds me more of a romance novel than a dystopian, but that’s just my opinion.
Afterthoughts of Regret
Afterthoughts of the Shattered (this one’s kinda vague but could also refer to being broken emotionally)I do like Afterthoughts of a Broken Heart, though. =)
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
I’m behind on the reading, just finished chapter 5So…Dune looks like a cat??? XD I went the entire first four chapters thinking he was a bird. *facepalm*
AAaand now I’ve finished chapter six.
Okay, I love this group. They’re hilarious, this is going to be fun.
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
XD I get that. But they sound cool!
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
AH I love this scene! =D
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
AH sorry for the extremely late response! this week has been kinda hectic and I didn’t get to read and appreciate what you’ve written till today *sigh*Ohhhhhh boy XD I love the interactions with Rocket and the rest of the group, they’re hilarious.
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Gwyndalf the Wise posted a new activity comment 1 year, 8 months ago
Cool. Yeah, that’s usually what happens to me with themes… this project was an exception cause I swiped the theme from the source XD
Oooo you have a mystery book? *grins* *loves mystery books*-
Oh my gosh, I am soooo sorry, I got this message in Oregon, and I don’t have laptop service over there so I couldn’t reply, and then my messages got busy.
But, yeah! It’s kind of like a mystery book, and the readers definitely ask a lot of questions and they don’t know the right answer, but the mystery part is on and off, it’s not a full blown…[Read more]
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic Loopy’s Space Comic in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
AHHH YAY *cheers for great art + story combined*
It looks amazing!
and I really like your bushy pink eyebrows alien dude XD and his sign…is the red spaceship Eddie’s and Ellie’s?
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic Another WIP Idea…. in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 8 months ago
This sounds like it’d be really good. =D
and I think it’s hilarious and great that you manage to make all stories in your brain related through characters XD -
Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
AGH STEVE! ❤️ Boy if you keep going like this it’s not gonna end well *sadness*
*round of applause* Great snippet, Freediom! =D
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic New Book Release! in the forum Book Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic Meet Adrian! The Newest Charrie in My WIP! in the forum Characters 1 year, 8 months ago
AHHH I think Adrian is my newest favorite character
sorry Lukas! XDI second @starshineness ‘s suggestion, that’s the most conflicty part of the story (for him) and the most interesting part to focus on.
And the collage is great!
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic Civil War Short Story Critque in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 8 months ago
Of course! =D
Also if you decide to post more of it, regardless of whether or not you want suggestions, I’d love to read it!
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic Paradise Lie series finally uncovered in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
OOo yay! *enjoys snacks* *and spy stories* *is very excited*
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Gwyndalf the Wise posted a new activity comment 1 year, 8 months ago
@gold_hummingbird
Ah. *wonders if Sunsplash is like Splash Kingdom but not from that chain*The fanfiction: (just a warning, summaries aren’t my strong suit, so this may or may not make sense)
Current Title: [SPY]DER-MAN
This will be a standalone but I reserve the right to change my mind. XD
Story: An overly-burdened spy must find the mole in…[Read more]-
@gwyndalf-the-wise Oh! Um, ha, Sunsplash is a waterpark. lol
Ohhh, I see! I really like that story idea! That’s honestly a really interesting theme, one that I’ve never really thought about. Honestly, when I make a story, I just write it, and the theme comes to me later. Like with this new story I’m making. It took me till the end of the third…[Read more]
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Cool. Yeah, that’s usually what happens to me with themes… this project was an exception cause I swiped the theme from the source XD
Oooo you have a mystery book? *grins* *loves mystery books*-
Oh my gosh, I am soooo sorry, I got this message in Oregon, and I don’t have laptop service over there so I couldn’t reply, and then my messages got busy.
But, yeah! It’s kind of like a mystery book, and the readers definitely ask a lot of questions and they don’t know the right answer, but the mystery part is on and off, it’s not a full blown…[Read more]
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic Edit thread (for all your editing questions) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Sorry I missed this! But I think the others got you covered. =)
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic Anyone have Spotify? in the forum Music 1 year, 8 months ago
Well…XD I used to have a Spotify account, but…I forgot the password and have managed lock myself out of it for….I think it’s a year now? I can’t create a new one either. *facepalm*
Cool idea though!
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Gwyndalf the Wise posted a new activity comment 1 year, 8 months ago
Oh nice! Yeah, I’ve only read Of a Flock so far, just finished it the other day. XD Schedules are hard.
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@gwyndalf-the-wise Yeah, they are. Especially since I am planning to become a lifeguard at Sunsplash, so I no longer have too much time anymore.
Also, you mentioned a fanfiction you were writing. What’s it about? 🙂
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic My Series REVEALED! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@euodia-vision
*swipes popcorn back, hides behind Freedom and her Marvel characters**has now subscribed*OHHHH this explains so much. XD I used to be confused on what Ara’s motivations were, now I understand.
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic My Series REVEALED! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 OOOOO yay! *eagerly awaits your infodump* *joins Freedom*
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago
Hmmm it reminds be of a blurred s. Or chain links, vaguely. Or a braid.
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@freedomwriter76
ok, thanks! <3
@gwyndalf-the-wise
XDXD it is basically a romance. It's dystopian, but most of the entire plot is about Layson trying to find a wife. It follows him on a really long journey as a releasor, but it's established early in the series having a family is his most important goal.
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XD Nice! Than I vote definitely keep Afterthoughts of a Broken Heart, it fits!