Greta

A dragon with arthritis.
A griffon prone to colds.

Haha, those are great @kate-flournoy!

The villain lives in a treehouse, a hero who is ugly

Haha, those are awesome @anna-brie!

A prince who is selfish (and decides to leave the princess in the tower :P)
A villain who wants to be good but doesn’t know how
A hero who wants to join the villain

…I don’t know; that’s all I’ve got. 🙂

A villain who despises black and so wears lime green all the time.

xD I love that @rolena-hatfield 🙂

Ok, I know I’m late, but welcome to Kingdom Pen @anna-brie! I haven’t been here that long, but I’ve already learned a TON about writing. 🙂 It’s an awesome website! Hope you enjoy it as much as I have. 😀

Awesome! @kate-flournoy It’s a great verse! 🙂

For our struggle is not against flesh and blood, but against the rulers, against the authorities, against the powers of this dark world and against the spiritual forces of evil in the heavenly realms. Therefore put on the full armor of God, so that when the day of evil comes, you may be able to stand your ground, and after you have done…

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That’s perfect! @kate-flournoy 😛

Ooo, I like that idea! @writefury

@Hope, I don’t have a Pinterest, but I could use Google images. Thanks for the ideas! 🙂

Or maybe he is obsessed with marrying the MC and that is why he brought her to his castle, but she refused with vehement obstinance, so he sought the 9 powers so that he he control her to his will, and then found out that she controlled the 9 powers …

xD @Daeus

What I was asking is why he wanted to control them— why he wanted power, why he wanted prestige. It seems a little cheesy to me that he would want them simply for their own sake— simply because he’s wholeheartedly black and finds pleasure in them for the destruction he can wreak with them. What does he want to accomplish with them, and why?<…

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@Daeus, Yes! I completely agree. There has to be a happy medium between forcing the Biblical principals and you-can-do-whatever-you-want-because-God-will-love-you-anyway. 🙂

@Daeus, Yes! I completely agree.

@kate-flournoy, great suggestion! I’m definitely going to work with the plot…what I wrote is by no means set in stone. 😉 I’m definitely going to work out why the villain wants the 9 Powers; it actually drives me crazy in stories when the villain has no particular purpose for destroying things and terrorizing people…he just does because he’s…[Read more]

Exactly! @Daeus 🙂 We can’t avoid the rules in the Bible (kind of like assuming there is a God in novels, it should also be a given that the morals of the Bible are true), but we don’t have to outline them in our stories.

@writefury, thanks for the ideas! I’ll have to think about the contradictions idea. 🙂

The story, so far, is about a girl (the MC) who lives in a small town in another land. It’s fantasy, so I’m probably going to set the story in another world (which I haven’t figured out the name of yet 🙂 ). An evil king rules the country in which she…[Read more]