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@Bluejay No, what’s it about?

Ooo, I like it. 🙂

@his-instrument Hi, Hannah! 😉 So glad you made it on here. 🙂 As @bluejay said, this is the bestiestist place on the internet.

@his-instrument Hi, Hannah! So glad you made it on here. 🙂 As @bluejay said, this is the bestiestist place on the internet.

@Daeus Awesome!!! Congratulations! That is quite an accomplishment. 😀

@Daeus I going to stop for now. I got 572 words of a new short story written. Thanks for writing with me! 🙂

@Daeus I going to stop for now. I got 579 words of a new short story written. Thanks for writing with me! 🙂

@Daeus I’ll join you for a bit…say, until 2:30?

@kate-flournoy Yes, I agree with this so much. {Or, as @spradlin would say “gives many thumbs up.” 😉 } Great point about the smallest personality traits affecting the character’s decisions.

@Daeus, thanks so much for critiquing it! 🙂

Thanks for reading and critiquing it, @kate-flournoy! 🙂

All right, @Daeus and @kate-flournoy. I’ve edited some. It’s still not quite done, but if you have time, would you mind reading it through? If you don’t have time, that’s perfectly fine.
@kate-flournoy, Is the showing vs. telling problem better? *looks hopeful*

The day of my thirteenth birthday I met my true love. I invited my entire…

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All right, @Daeus and @kate-flournoy. I’ve edited some. It’s still not quite done, but if you have time, would you mind reading it through? If you don’t have time, that’s perfectly fine.
@kate-flournoy, Is the showing vs. telling problem better? *looks hopeful*

The day of my thirteenth birthday I met my true love. I invited my entire…

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@Hannah-c, Thank you! 😀 🙂 😉

@kate-flournoy I know…it’s so depressing. I still can’t believe Cruz and Kasich dropped out. 🙁 I just have to remember that God’s got it under control. *sigh*

@Hannah-c Thank you! Yes, it’s actually a lamb. XD

@bluejay I like the topic for the poem! 😉 However, I agree with @Daeus that there isn’t really much rhythm to the poem…I would work on the meter and rhythm a bit and go from there. Great idea for a poem, though! 🙂