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RAE posted an update 1 year ago
@grcr @spinner4him @jonas @euodia-vision @freedomwriter76 @hanako @highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @devastate-lasting @power @anyone randomly looking at my profile.
I would like some serious criticizing on this scene. I don’t want to hear anything like “It’s good” I want to hear stuff like, “It needs help here…” “It’s fine here…” I don’t…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Blade of the Void in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year ago
So this is essentially a Naln and Szeth character.
(I’m assuming you meant ‘Nale’? I think you combined ‘Nale’ and Taln.) Yeah, I think it might have been largely subconscious on my part, but I definitely see the similarities. What I find intriguing about my character is the differences from Nale or Szeth. The scene is obviously…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Blade of the Void in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year ago
Although another theme is to simply avoid making deals with the devil😅
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Blade of the Void in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year ago
The moral is hypocrisy. To do evil on someone means that you yourself have done evil, regardless of what name you have committed it under.
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Cloaked Mystery started the topic Blade of the Void in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year ago
@highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom @rae @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @hanako @acancello @hybridlore @anyone
This is a short story I had to write for my creative writing class. I thought I’d share it here as well. I’m not necessarily looking for feedback–I got plenty already–but if you have any thoughts, feel free to share them.
Blade of the…[Read more]
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Sara posted a new activity comment 1 year ago
@grcr
You got it right!
I want to say 50…but i feel like it’s a trick question XD-
Ha ha! 😄
(yeah, Hanako and I said 50 at first too lol)-
Could his sister be dead?
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Weeeelllll…. She’s not dead yet…
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She is 98!
if Tom was 4, his sister was 2 (there is a two year gap). If Tom is 100, she is 98 (cuz the gap didn’t change). lol-
Oh my gosh. I feel so stupid now….lol
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lol 😅
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@rae @savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer @grcr
Who wants to continue this conversation?
Our original plan to start the next day in the morning (yesterday) utterly failed lol.
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Sara replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Oh my gosh…this is amazing! I love Blair <3
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hybridlore replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
This looks really interesting!! I’m excited to see more of this, I think the characters have a lot of potential!
I think some of the dialogue from Blair seems a little forced, if that makes sense.
Mainly just this paragraph:
“I know, but I really hate the shallow conversations.” He moaned, “I never feel like I can express my opini…
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Sara replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
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RAE posted an update 1 year ago
@grcr How do you do the characters on your cover image?
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I just searched AI generated characters into google and saved the ones I liked/thought-looked-closest-to-my-characters. Then I put them all together as a pic and loaded it. 🙃
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Okay, just curious.
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RAE replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Okay. I guess we could just have them stay behind.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Ok.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Okay, we’ll miss you. Do you want Flaz and Lane to actually go away, or should we just drag them along and ignore them? That’s what we’re doing with Kaine, and it would mean that if you wanted to rejoin eventually, you could. It would also help not break continuity, since “canonically” they can’t leave.
Or @rae, do you think we could have…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Ok. We’ll miss you and your charries 🙂
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Sara replied to the topic Characters of England | A 19th Century Role Play in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
Aww we’ll miss you, but I understand.
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RAE posted a new activity comment 1 year ago
@grcr That may be hard, since the two sides of Glace happen at two different times of his life.
His childhood/adolescence/and early adult like are the before, and the after is after he takes the fall for someone else (he didn’t even tell his sister or father that he really didn’t do it) and got banished from the Fettian empire. That’s the after. -
RAE posted a new activity comment 1 year ago
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@grcr That may be hard, since the two sides of Glace happen at two different times of his life.
His childhood/adolescence/and early adult like are the before, and the after is after he takes the fall for someone else (he didn’t even tell his sister or father that he really didn’t do it) and got banished from the Fettian empire. That’s the after.
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I think the second part flows pretty well!
This paragraph, “Something impacted Nahim’s armor about six inches above where his plate ended at the bottom of the rib cage. There was a boom and a flash from the object. Nahim drew his gun and aimed into the fog. His helmet searched for some signature from the person who had shot at him, but it could d…[Read more]
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