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@grcr @whalekeeper

Skyraptor

“Say, how’d you come here?” Evander asked.

Skyraptor shrugged. “I have no idea…..I fell asleep on my master’s ship and woke up here.”

“Master?” Gus asked.

“A human. He adopted me before I even hatched out of my egg.” she explained. “He and I have a special connection…but I can’t sense him at all right now. He…[Read more]

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Yay!!! Thank you!!! 🙂

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And btw…I tagged you where I posted my WIP if you’re interested 🙂

I’ll be patient…It’s that good!!!

@grcr @acancello @trailblazer

Here’s my WIP if you’re interested! And don’t feel pressured to read it if you’re busy (or just don’t want to!, I understand that life gets complicated and busy!

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Just read this! You did a great job with helping me connect with the characters. They feel so real!!!

I like your descriptions, but like others are saying, they were kind of long. I think it would help if you spread the descriptions out along the chapter instead of making them into one long paragraph. I’ve struggled with this as well, so…[Read more]

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Skyraptor

For once, a thought came through loud and clear from the tiger–Evander, he said he was called.

She could see him swimming in the ocean, chased by a pack of dog-like creatures.

Odd….who would go up against that huge of a cat? even in a pack?

Gus, the sheep-like one (that’s what he is right whaley?), explained…[Read more]

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Ooo, excerpts. Thank you for sharing! I like this Blair and Shannon. (Poetry, huzzah!)

I also relished the way you incorporated the poem he was reading into the opening. When the poem stopped and the dialogue began, it was like when the curtains on a stage are first pulled back.

I do agree that the descriptions were a little hard to get…[Read more]

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Cool! I didn’t have time to read it in full detail yet, but one thing that stood out to me skimming it was the description felt a bit heavy-handed. First you describe Blair, then his room, then Shannon, and then Belle. All of them were pretty long paragraphs of just description, and it gets a bit tiring.

Anyways, just what I noticed. I’ll…[Read more]

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Gus

The cat drooped.

“I’m sorry, Evander, for whatever must’ve happened to you,” Gus said, bowing his head respectfully. “At least now, you’re right safe, and ain’t that a blessing?”

One of only a few blessings. But it was better than being given nothing at all.

Gus furrowed his snowy brow, and tapped a rhythm with his hoof i…[Read more]

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I hope so!

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Yeah i just tried and the green bar thingy loads but then it goes away and nothing happens. I’ve hit refresh multiple times but it doesn’t work 🙁

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I tried a half-hour ago and it still doesn’t work :(((

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I can’t add a pfp either ever since i joined!!

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Evander’s so sweet XP

Gus

Gus came a little closer, and tilted his head, his large set of horns rotating to a strange angle. “Gus. It’s nice to meet you, Evander. ‘Scuse me for interrupting you with a rude scream, while you were drinking. I don’t usually scream like that.”

He wasn’t sure how to interpret the cat’s expressions. He hoped…[Read more]

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(GRCR you sound like you’re doing a quiet villain laugh XD)

Gus

“No,” Gus said, still slightly breathless, hitching up his overalls. “I’ve never been here before. I was wonderin’ if you ruled the island. You sure look it.”

He felt the little lizard brushing past his ankles in the grass.

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Gus

Gus perked up at the voice, and almost immediately relaxed, his trembling, fleecy body easing to a soft quiver.

He stood up, and faced the giant cat.

The cat’s pelt, streaked with light and shadow, rippled with muscle as it flinched back. But, after a moment, it padded a few steps closer.

“How pretty you are,” Gus breathed.

@grcr @keilah-h Thanks!

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Gus

“Are you okay? What did you step on?”

Gus bit down on his hand accidentally, and tried to blink away the sudden tears. They tricked down his chin as he looked down.

The speaker was a strange lizard in the grass beside him.

Gus smiled politely through the tears, and mumbled under his breath. “Quiet, little ‘un. There’s…[Read more]

@grcr @keilah-h

(Gus won’t see Skyraptor yet)

Gus

The little fox did not follow. Instead, faint snores made their way to Gus’ ears.

Gus nodded, satisfied, and tripping his way down the edge of the water a ways, until he came to a soggy bank, covered in a thin layer of silt.

It trickled down a small but rocky slope, the source somewhere in t…[Read more]

@grcr you mind if Skyraptor meets your charrie? if you don’t want to just say he didn’t notice her.

Skyraptor

Faint thoughts led her down the river. Surely there was life here besides her.

Sentient minds, be they animal, human, or alien, were different than those of mere beasts…. This thought she was tracing was that of a being who could talk…[Read more]