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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months, 1 week ago
@jonas @theducktator @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @grcr @esther-c @whalekeeper @anyone-else
I haven’t heard from you guys in a while and I was just making sure you were still up for reading through my draft? It’s okay if you’re not, just please let me know…I don’t want to annoy anyone with tags XDXD
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Esther posted an update 3 months, 1 week ago
Ok, I’m tagging a lot of people for this, but don’t feel obligated to reply.
So, I’ve gotten stuck in my current WIP, but as I work through that slowly, I want to return to an older WIP that I worked on over the summer and really want to refine. It’s only in a first draft, but I’d like to have a critique partner for it.
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Potato reporter replied to the topic WIP Suggestion in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 months, 1 week ago
Oh, then yes, and no.
Yeah, I am still considering which time periods I should choose from! And fort the very important question, I have already started working on her origin! I was thinking maybe that she had a test or a choice that was like a choice from God, and she was given the curse of immortality or something like that!…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
Participants/potential participants:
@hybridlore @ellette-giselle @raxforge @esther-c @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @theshadow @keilah-h
The others:@power @calyhuge @whalekeeper @theducktator @elishavet-pidyon @the_lost-journal @trailblazer @jonas @beth-torres @euodia-vision @thearcaneaxiom @smiley @freed_and_redeemed @loopylin @felicity @keilah-h @rae @ellette-giselle @theducktator @grcr @linus-smallprint @hybridlore@raxforge @whalekeeper @loopylin @arcticanimals @esther-c @jonas and @liberty @stephine
and @shadow
(I am so sos sososososossoso sorry If I put you tag more…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 months, 1 week ago
You’ve certainly improved a lot!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 months, 1 week ago
Woah!!
Watching your style change over the years is such a fun thing as an artist!! It really shows how you improve!
I love your style, btw. Your characters are always so interesting!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 months, 1 week ago
@grcr you’re welcome! Honestly, your original art style wasn’t THAT bad, but I’m assuming Roblox-y characters wasn’t the original intent of your story, so the new one does serve to humanize them and make them more believable in a serious story.
That’s kinda weird and made more sense in my head, but ehh.
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Loopy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 months, 1 week ago
@grcr I love the improvement! Those look so good! I love how you see all three distinct personalities in their faces even though they’re all smiling
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 months, 1 week ago
@grcr wowww that’s such an improvement! They look great!
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Andrew replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 months, 1 week ago
Wow, that is a great improvement, good job 👍
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 months, 1 week ago
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Potato reporter replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 months, 2 weeks ago
@keilah-h @rae @ellette-giselle @theducktator @grcr @linus-smallprint@hybridlore @raxforge @whalekeeper @loopylin @arcticanimals @esther-c @jonasand @liberty @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium @koshka @power @freed_and_redeemed
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Potato reporter replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
I say, against murder.
AMEN!
I’ve never been, but it’s on my bucket list.
O can understand why! 😀 It is so fun seeing all the other people there! (plus there are so many people that aren’t even from America!)
Oh, heh… sorry about that!
Cool! I imagined everyone would be against mur…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months, 2 weeks ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
@whalekeeper @grcr @koshka @kyronthearcanin @stephie (I don’t have your email yet! 😥) @theducktator @loopylin
Okay, I’m just going to send the invites out! Y’all are welcome to join whenever you can.
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hybridlore replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Thanks so much, girl!! 💕 You’ll be missed!
Sara just sent them over to me, so I got it! Should just be a few more minutes.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
I sent you an email with the emails of people who said they were going to do it!
Yeah, sorry it’s confusing lol…ahhhh
I sent Hybridlore your email, so if you still want to do it hopefully you can!!!!!!!!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
@koshka @hybridlore @elishavet-pidyon @stephie @theducktator @whalekeeper @loopylin @grcr
Sorry guys, I need to push back the meet to 9am Mountain time (which is 10 am CST, 11 am EST and 8 am PST… some things came up :/
Ahh I’m sorry for the short notice
I don’t think I’ll be able to do it that long either, maybe like an hour and a…[Read more]
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<p>should I tag? Eh why not!</p>
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Actually, I’mma remake the moodboards, hehehe. So they shall be revealed later this week. :PP
@esther-c
I replied but didn’t tag you. Not sure if you got it.
I would be willing to try and help with this. You know my views on Romance are rather different than norm, and I believe highschool romantic relationships aren’t healthy. But I’m willing to give it a shot.
I also do edit. I’m not a line-by-line editor, but I have worked as a plot/character/story editor before.
We do have different beliefs on…[Read more]
I appreciate the offer!! Truly!
But like you said, we might not work super well together because of our different viewpoints. So yeah, right now I’d say no, but I will keep you in mind! :))
No problem! I can be your last resort if no one else offers. 😉
Sounds good. 😉 Let me know if you want to be tagged when I post the chapters on here some time! :))
Mm. Sounds interesting, but I’m totally unqualified. I don’t think I’d be able to help much… Sorry… 😅😑
Hey no worries! 🤗
I’m sorry, I don’t think I can help you 🙁
That’s totally fine, girl! ☺️
I’m definitely interested in reading your novel, but I’ve read almost no YA, so I wouldn’t be much help.
No worries! I’ll be sure to tag you tho when I start sharing it on here!!
Awesome! 🙂
@esther-c I would love to help! This went into my spam for some reason, so I’m sorry I didn’t get back to you. Are you still looking for someone?
Actually…I think you might be perfect. You gave some great feedback on my short story, so I’m sure you could do the same for my novel! :))
I’ll PM you later this week with more details and the link to the doc. Thank you so much!!! 🤗
Awesome! I love family and sibling dynamics, and I also read a good amount of YA, so this seems right up my alley! (Although I won’t be able to help much with the 90s references, haha.)
Do you still have my email from the short story critique?
Yay yay!! (Oh I know, right?? I’ve asked my parents and some other older writers I’ve met through KDWC, and even though they gave me a lot to use [plus Google, lol], there’s still something difficult about getting it right since I didn’t live then 🤪)
Yes I believe so!
@esther-c Yeah, that totally makes sense! I was gonna say, ask your parents xD. But I’m sure it’s still difficult.
Great!! 😄
I may have to get some YA recs from you sometime, because I struggle to find clean fiction that I would actually enjoy 😭
Oh definitely! I’m sure I can come up with a list. Middle grade stuff can be great if it’s well done, because content is so much better. 😉
@hybridlore
Please tag me if you post recommendations! I want to read YA, but it’s usually filthy and cringe.
For sure!! Until you come across that one middle school relationship that somehow works out perfectly. 😂
Ok for some reason even though I still see your comments on the short story doc, it won’t let me view your email. 😅 Could you share that again with me so I can share the other doc?? I’ll tell you as soon as I see it if you don’t want to leave your email up.
Awesome! Tysm!! I’ll probably send you the doc tomorrow since I need to make a few notes on it first. :))
Ok I added you to the document! You should get an email about it I believe. (:
Hoo boy. I’d love to, but uhhhh…I wouldn’t be any help. I’m a terrible critiquer and my romance experience is practically nil. You would probably help me more than I help you….sorry!
Funny enough though, my own romance work (a fanfic) took place in 1970 in New Mexico. What are the odds?
Ahh, no problem! :))
No way! That’s so cool! XD
Yeah it was just a consequence of how the original story was set up, but it’s funny to think about.
I doubt your characters will experience anything even close to mine though lol
Oh dear, was it a Star Wars fanfic?? In that case, I hope my charries aren’t handling the types of weapons they use. 🤣
No, it was something else, but yeah there were a lot of weapons involved XD
My Star Wars fanfics don’t really cross over into our world. Yet.
Though I suppose in a fanfic, you could do whatever 🤷🏻♀️
Oh duhhhh 🤦🏻♀️ I’ve watched like all the Star Wars movies, I should know they don’t take place on earth 🤣
lolllll no biggie.