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Ellis — Elderstrand (Group 1)

The newcomer stared in astonishment as the armored creatures sagged and went still. “That was…incredible…” he stammered, still in shock. “No wonder–”

Just then, there was a prolonged wailing blast of a horn. The man stiffened. “We have…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @raxforge @hybridlore @rae @grcr @loopylin @the_lost-journal @beth-torres @highscribeofaetherium (I think I got everyone)

Alright! Sorry for the wait, but I’m here to get us moving again.

To quickly recap, I believe that this is where things currently stand:

One group, consisting of Marcel, Leon and Julian, Ben and…[Read more]

Anyone want to critique this??? I edited the prologue…AGAIN…bwahahaha

I feel too guilty to tag people (idk why…that’s just me) but I’m still going to tag some people…lol

@rae @jonas (not sure if you are still on here a lot but I’m ALIVE in case you were wonderingg!) @highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom (not sure if you’re still here…[Read more]

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Joseph returned to the Caddicks and committed himself to the work the Lord had called him to. Mr. Caddick, David, and Stephen were eager to dive into the training Noah and Darrien gave to the other young men seeking to lead in the church. Not…

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Joseph and Noah were exhausted and slept until evening. It was Joseph who woke first. Getting up, he roused Noah, who was sleeping lightly. The two tidied the room and Joseph started downstairs. When he reached the bottom, one of the little…

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Happy happy day! It’s super long!!!

 

Joseph sat on his bed and carefully opened the journal, his fingers trembling with the wave of emotions that filled him. Memories of Aaron flooded his mind, and for a moment he was too blinded by tears to…

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The next morning when Joseph woke, he lay in bed a moment, trying to remember what had happened the day before. All at once it came back to him and he scrambled to his feet. Yanking on his vest he hurried into the hall and knocked on Asher and E…

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@grcr

I love that!! I love how you can see so much personality in each person! <33

@loopylin

So cuteee! Yesss, she needs to become a new character!!

@highscribeofaetherium

That looks soo good!!!

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ALTERNATE NEXT SECTION!!!!!

 

Please be honest as y’all read this, because saving the boys is going to be a HUGE change. However, I think it may be the right one, and some interesting things happened that makes me think so. However, I am still on the edge, a…[Read more]

@grcr

That’s totally fine! I think Duckator said the same thing.

By the way, if you do turn a character into an animal, you could make it so that they were always an animal, not turned into one. Either way, it’s up to you! I didn’t even think of having them know that they were once human! That’s a funny concept!

@grcr

HIIIIII!!!! Glad you’re back!! I was thinking about you the other day! Good to know you’re alive lol! 😁

Lol glad I’m still alive, too!

@whalekeeper

Yeah I’m doing pretty well! I hope you are, too!

@loopylin

Hi welcome back! It’s good to see you too. Makes me happy when older KPers come back <3

I don’t even feel like an old KPer but I gue…[Read more]

@grcr you’re so good at drawing multiple characters in a scene together I love it <3

@loopylin

@ellette-giselle

@trailblazer

@savannah_grace2009

@stephie

@grcr

@jonas

@hybridlore

@highscribeofaetherium

@freed_and_redeemed

@mineralizedwritings

@whalekeeper

 

Just in case anyone is backing out because they don’t have animal characters, let me say: that’s okay.

 

You can create an animal character, or you can actually…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Hey, all the reasons people wanted to save Eric could apply to Asher too. He’s also young. He looks innocent… lol. Make them react more to both of them instead of just the younger one, maybe?

OR highlight how hurt Eric is by Asher’s death in front of the crowd. That’ll make them see how much it’s affecting families and hurting c…[Read more]

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Joseph sat at the table and stared at his plate. Noah and Darrien had already eaten and were pulling on their boots. They knew the hard day of work they had ahead, and they had been able to eat

Sabina put her arm over Joseph’s sh…

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Ben Gunn and Flare – Group 1, Everstrand edge

Flare and Ben looked at on another. They nodded. Off they went towards the river jumping roof over roof.

Ben felt tired, of course he’s tired, he’s old. I’m getting too old for this, Ben thought as he landed on a roof, catching h…[Read more]

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Sorry it’s so short.

Joseph woke. For a long moment he lay, trying to figure out what was happening and where he was. He had been so exhausted he didn’t even remember lying down. There was an odd sound, a sound he knew he had heard many times be…

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@grcr

Many that live deserve death. And some that die deserve life.

~J.R.R. Tolkien.

@grcr

Oh.

Wow.

I didn’t even know you were reading.

Hmmm.

Why shouldn’t I kill them?