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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
NEXT SECTION!
The weeks passed, and Joseph lived through them in a blur of joy and excitement. He and Amelia had many wonderful conversations with her parents, and even some between just the two of them. They worked together when they could and enjoyed obs…
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
Thank you for snowballing me and sorry if I missed one of you! (And sorry it took so long for me to reply 😭😭) Finally getting around to this… lol. @koshka @freed_and_redeemed @loopylin @whalekeeper
Little bit more than 500 words but I had to finish the scene : )
Oh, and you probably know Liz as Liv (The scientist from my wip OLH) I had to…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
The next morning, Julian and Leon left to start another journey. They wouldn’t be returning to the capital, so Joseph sent no return letter to Sabina.
Joseph walked with the two former soldiers outside the gates of the town. It was good to be with old friends.…
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Potato reporter replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 5 months ago
oh, okay!
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Potato reporter replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 5 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
Okay, I made the suggested changes to the last couple of sections, and I’m working on some more Joseph/Amelia interactions. I thought I’d just go ahead and post the next scene while I take care of the other stuff.
NEXT SECTION
After Leon and Julian left…
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 1 week ago
Don’t worry, he will die a well-deserved horrible death.
😅
I still wish his story didn’t have to end that way😭
@rae @ellette-giselle @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @esther-c @keilah-h @grcr @anyone-else-*shrug*
A couple scenes from my WW1 WIP👀
TW: MENTIONS/ALLUSIONS TO AB*SE. THREATS. DEATH. MENTIONS OF BLOOD.
“You lea…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 5 months, 1 week ago
Nice.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 5 months, 1 week ago
@grcr Ooh, looks so pretty!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 5 months, 1 week ago
@grcr oooooh that’s an awesome board!
also what’s funny is the font in the “you want battle? I’ll give you war.” quote is the same kind of font that Erin Hunter books (think warrior cats and stuff) are printed in. I recognized it instantly.
(I looked it up, and it is from warriors! from the character Skystar!!)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 months, 1 week ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
NEXT SECTION!
Time continued to pass, and the days grew warmer and longer. Joseph thrived as he spent his days working hard in the fields and the evening studying with his brothers in Christ, or fellowshipping with the Caddick family. It was during this time t…
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Three Ducks in a Trench Coat replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 1 week ago
@highscribeofaetherium @calyhuge
I’M MELTING!
Hmmm…. pastes @stephie @grcr @arcticanimals and @keilah-h upside the head.
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 1 week ago
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Potato reporter replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 5 months, 1 week ago
perfect, Thanks!
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Potato reporter replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 5 months, 1 week ago
Is this a good way to portray your charrie? VERY talkative.
“Weird, why did that car leave early?” A boy with longer blond hair came up to the van. “Oh well.” He shrugged. “Guess it was in a hurry.” Edgar stared at the boy standing there. “What is with your… appearance?” He asked. “Are you going surfing?”
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Potato reporter replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 5 months, 1 week ago
That was perfect!
running, swimming, baking
Uhhh, heh! He might have a hard time! 😅
Yes. So, Buddy is easily sucked into his thoughts. (He’s got melancholic traits in him…) He sometimes doubts his capabilities, even if outwardly he seems confident. He gets frustrated when he can’t meet what’s expected of him. Frustrated and als…
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Potato reporter replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 5 months, 1 week ago
Thanks!
What does this mean? Like a general overview?
You already did this! 🙂
(Basically yes.)
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 5 months, 1 week ago
@grcr @esther-c @ellette-giselle
Thanks so much!! 🤩 I think Everett’s is my favorite. I really like the colors and pictures in his lol.
@ellette
Okay, so for the book I’m working on right now, he’s sort of indecisive. Sara *slight spoilers* becomes a Christian and starts attending the underground church meetings with Everett and Jess, but Cole…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 1 week ago
Understandable :]
Felicity, Ellis, Baron/Brutus, Ben and Flare and heading into the city to save one of Felicity’s friends from capture.
Everyone else are either injured or contemplating where to go next. Jonas’ rebel NPC is leading.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 1 week ago
@jonas @ellette-giselle @hybridlore @grcr
Okay, so the rest of Group 1 has to reach the river, right?
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