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@ellette-giselle

I was not expecting it at all!! 😂🥺

@hybridlore

Okay. Sounds good.

I know!!!!! Poor kiddos!!

Did you expect that to happen, or did it take you blindsided?

@ellette-giselle

Ahem. Sorry. I meant to say, I don’t know if the glitch is on my side or yours. Probably mine.

and yeah, I could access the chapters, it just took a sec to reload so maybe that’s what I needed to do yesterday.

Now… 314???????!

And Jonathan!!!!

nothing to note in these really. I enjoyed them.

@grcr

Oh my word!! *squeal of excitement* yay!! Well, the next ones will be out tomorrow.

Oh that would be SO COOL. *Hopes and prays temptation will win.*

@grcr It would be such a cool comic!

@ellette-giselle

Ohhh, gotcha.

I don’t know, let me check.

@whalekeeper

Yes, it sure is a good one!

@hybridlore

Oh, is that something glitchy on my end or on yours?

Equilibrium is a movie. It’s rated R for one scene at the end that we skip, and it has language but we filter it out with ClearPlay.

It’s based off the book Fahrenheit 451 which I really want to read, but I haven’t yet, so I don’t…[Read more]

@grcr

Wait really?!! You’re gonna cry!!??

*jumps around the room cheering*

*pauses and realizes that is not the right response to someone crying*

*offers tissue*

*goes back to celebrating*

Oooo, a comic would be pretty insanely cool!!! Oh wow. What would you think of doing a few of the characters in comic form? You don’t have top if you…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I was going to, but it wouldn’t let me sign in with my alt account and I didn’t want my main on there for all to see.

I don’t think I’ve heard of Equilibrium—is that a movie or a book?

@whalekeeper

Which plot twist? The one about Jonas’s dad?

@hybridlore

Okay thanks.

I noticed you don’t comment. Can you not do that for some reason because of a setting I have, or do you rather tag me here?

Yes, I like Don too. 🙃

Hmm. I’ve seen the movie, but I never was able to get my hands on the book. I actually took a lot of inspiration from Equilibrium, and even some from Hunger Games,…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

It was right around when Sara burst out at Jonathan.

I don’t know… I like Don. 😅 And Jonathan.

also, have you read the Giver? This book reminds me a lot of that so far.

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CHAPTER 4 and 5!!!!

@hybridlore

Yay! Wonder what glitched before…. 🤔

Oh really? Whoops! Did you mark the spot, or do I need to go find it?

Glad the tension is building!! Have a favorite character yet?

@ellette-giselle

It worked!

I liked these chapters. You did a great job of increasing the tension. I did notice that you briefly switched into Sara’s POV during the first chapter, then went back to Jonathan. I would fix that.

Great job!

@hybridlore

That is very odd. Did you let it load and scroll down? I just tried clicking on the link as a guest and it worked fine for me…..

Try again. I reloaded the page on my end,

@ellette-giselle

They’re not showing up on the link for me.

@liberty

Gotcha.

@whalekeeper

haha.

@linus-smallprint

Lolololol. I’ve gotten to the point where spellcheck knows my shortcuts and auto-corrects for me. It only messes up sometimes. But still….. mine can be a bit of a mess once I’m though, and I always run edits before posting.

@linus-smallprint

Okay! Most people seem to be reacting positively to this, so I will definitely conciser coming back

Yes please.

Interesting. Did you find it confusing at all when it switched to reveal that Cedrick was narrating everything?

Uh… not really sure. At the moment I was just in speed-read mode, not really edit mode. I was…[Read more]