-GRCR-

@elishavet-pidyon @whalekeeper @loopylin

“He gave the kids who had spoken to Viktor a cold look”

I want to see a book where when a character does that it actually makes ice start growing on the other person. Just something that comes to me when I see that phrase.

@grcr

How do you feel about another character, or you want a break?

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TWO NEW CHAPTERS!!

@hybridlore

I know. It was so cute!!

My poor boys! They are in a sure fix.

@liberty

Same here…

@ellette-giselle

Aww! Jonathan and Amber and Leo were so cute. 🥰

Poor 618. And 621. That government! 😡

@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore @liberty

TWO NEW CHAPTERS!!

@whalekeeper
Okay awesome! That is not really a feeling I want you to have. XD

@hybridlore

Yay! I’m glad you liked it! Yep, Jonathan and Michael are back!

@ellette-giselle

Yay! Jonathan and Michael are back!!

These were great chapters. I can’t wait for 618 (Rory?) to meet the rebellion. (I’m assuming that will happen, anyway.)

@liberty, I think they were your comments? I really hope you’re wrong about Michael dying. 🥺😢

@liberty

lol. Well good.

@liberty

Ooo yay! So glad!

Yes… I did…. (I have an aspiring pilot of a brother with pilot friends, so yes. XD) but I also invented this plane so I have a little leeway.

why, did something stand out that seemed incorrect?

@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @grcr @whalekeeper @power @hybridlore @liberty

TWO MORE NEW CHAPTERS. FOUR IN TOTAL TODAY.

And goodnight.

@theducktator
I’m glad you’re happy with Evan’s board. How is Evan the duck btw?

Sounds good! I’ll be looking forward to sunday comments!

@ellette-giselle

Hooray! Evan got a board! Some of the quotes on Jason’s remind me of my grandfather. He’s an engineer. XD I like Cassion already, though his Romanesque name in a dystopia is messing with my brain. XD With school, work, and dance starting, I likely won’t be as consistent with this book. You may get a week’s worth of comments each…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I listen to rock and metal sometimes

Someone made a heavy metal version of  The Pirates Who Don’t Do Anything. It’s awesome. XD

@theshadow

I don’t usually listen to rock, rap, (except Hamilton. I love Hamilton), or pop, but I LOVE jazz. (I’m listening to Frank Sinatra as I write this). I’d chalk this up with the food questions in w…[Read more]

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TWO NEW CHAPTERS. Possibly more later.

@whalekeeper

Thank you very much!

That was really helpful about the description thing. I think that makes more sense. I wonder too if I over-did the “buzz” words in dystopian literature because I was trying to cut down on description. XD I’ll totally look at that.

Hmmm, that’s interesting what you are saying aboyt the Christianity thing.…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Wow!! That was fast!

Okay awesome! I’d love to see your answers to the questions!

Hmm, I guessed you might be the one to bring that up. I think we both have different beliefs on this in general, but if there are some things you want to talk about, then I’m willing to listen. I think it may end up one of those impasses like…[Read more]