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new chapter!

P.O.V.

You might live in some old murder mystery because on all the main roads in the town and the highway leading into it, there are these strange stains of dark red splashes on the road that cover the road for about five feet as if someone poured a big bucket of whatever it is on the road. There is one stain on each of the main roads and two…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

If you have another book later on that doesn’t have Christian rebellion as a major component, I will be happy to help, so feel free to tag me then!

Will do! 🫡

@linus-smallprint

Yay! Thanks!

Let me take a look.

Wow, that was some great feedback, even though we don’t agree on the rebellion thing. So thank you for taking the time to reply, even though you don’t like the book as much as some others.

I can mix up a few of those scenes like you suggested, and I can reword a couple things, because…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Wow! That was so tense! I can’t wait for Cassion to tell them!

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FORTH CHAPTER TODAY

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THIRD CHAPTER TODAY

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SECOND CHAPTER TODAY

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FIRST CHAPTER TODAY

@linus-smallprint

Thank you so much!

I know some of us were discussing this during the book, but I like the idea of showing Sara and Cole’s closer relationship in the beginning of the book. I’m going to look and see if I can insert this into the early chapters.

I see what you mean about Alec being a pretty stagnant character during the book.…[Read more]

@theshadow

Thank you for the concern, it’s so kind of you! Your right on the money, I have noticed I’ve become a bit obsessive/overly scrupulous about things recently, so as you mentioned I will look into OCD.

No problem! 🙃 I hope you find some helpful material. Just let me know if you want me to link some stuff that’s helped me before! Pra…[Read more]

@hybridlore

well i’ll try to add more later. i’m busy at the moment.

@ellette-giselle

You’re just going to leave us on that?? 🥺

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a third new chapter!

@hybridlore

Thanks!

More in a minute….

@ellette-giselle

Aww. Those were good.

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another new chapter!

ugh. Still doesn’t work.

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1st chapter of today.

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4th chapter today.