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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
The Protector — Gabriel Mai
Gabriel nodded. “Good.” He stood, the voices that still had been whispering in his head that day were quiet as he had bound up her arms, but now they returned, a constant noise slowly driving him insane.
Gabriel waved one of his glowing blades ahead. The walls were rough like brick, the floor with l…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
LOL, take a look
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Gabriel Mai — The Protector
Gabriel untucked his shirt, cutting along the hem in a long strip, then cut another one. He pulled the vial disinfectant from his pocket. “Hold still.” He took her arm, trying to be gentle, but he knew it would sting. He silently cursed himself for leaving salve in his cottage and not slipping it into h…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 4 months, 3 weeks ago
*gasp* THE FIRST ONE!!! 😱
and yes, the second one is something that sometimes happens for me. Hard to keep track of what sets some characters off when others are fine…. 🙃
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
The Protector — Gabriel Mai
Gabriel nodded, backing closer to the door, before spinning around, tumbling inside with Lucy and shutting the hatch, darkness enveloping them as the crow’s talons scraped against the rough metal, their screeches of frustration cutting through the fog outside.
Inside, the air was stale but strangely w…[Read more]
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RAE's profile was updated 4 months, 3 weeks ago
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Why did you choose to write about your main character? in the forum Topic of the Week 4 months, 3 weeks ago

Ryla became the first MC for my current WIP because I was fiddling around with some tiny ducks and arranged them into a scene in which they were in a circle surrounding one laying on a flat rock, and another wearing an eraser cap on his head about to kill her with a tack. I immediately wanted to know what was going through the mind of the poor…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Yes, I do every year, except this year because my Mom made canned cranberry sauce…hence why I didn’t eat it because it wasn’t the recipe I like.
I don’t eat it on anything, just straight cranberry sauce.
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RAE replied to the topic Why did you choose to write about your main character? in the forum Topic of the Week 4 months, 3 weeks ago
In Guardian Angels
my beloved flopNahim, in his earliest form, was a broken soldier finding healing. At first he was just another character, but eventually, as I got older and hit troubles in my life, I began to morph him into something that resembled some of my thoughts and feelings. He became almost a way of self-expression over the years, b…[Read more] -
The Ducktator replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
I haven’t been watching it, but I think after the book they managed to revive him. He’s my favorite character and I don’t want him permanently dead. 🙁
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
All hail the best Thanksgiving food! I assume your family makes the sauce?
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
@loopylin @whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon
Awesome! I’ll put Celarent and Ryla in tomorrow. Should I just pick teams for them?
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The mailbox! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
To: Mellissa Thompson, my secret hideout, the In Between place
From: Angelita, 4647 Flambert Lane, Dingyville, Maryland, The United States
Dear Mel,
That pool sounds scary. What is an inbetween place? How do you get to one? Were there frogs at that weird indoor pool? Frogs are way less gross than boys. FROGS don’t leave their u…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
It’s not painful to read. You describe things clearly, there are varied sentence lengths, and you suggest emotion at sprinkled points through the sections. You also don’t harp on descriptions, which is something I struggle with.
Thanks.
But stubborn me still hates it (it’s a me problem, I am genuinely thankful)
Also, I really, reall…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
The Protector — Gabriel Mai
Gabriel nodded, his jaw tight, knowing Lucy couldn’t get there in time. He judged the distance, and the closeness of the crows, but before he finished thinking, he sheathed his daggers and scooped Lucy up, apologizing, remembering how she kicked him last time. Then he ran for what felt like the m…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
oh for sure!!
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