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@hybridlore

Asher would not appreciate you bringing that up again. lol.

No, not much to rewrite. Just a little.

@ellette-giselle

Gotcha. Yeah, no problem. He did faint, so there obviously was enough blood lost for that. You’re good! So, does this mean you’ll have to rewrite a lot of what you already have, or not much since you’re about to have Joseph leave?

@hybridlore

Okay, I see what you mean. Eric was just teasing when he was being formal.

I’m envisioning a much larger cut. As I said, a “gash”And actually, depending on where the cut is, you can bleed out.Maybe not from something like that, though. That might be overdoing it. This is my first draft of this section. 😉

@ellette-giselle

Overall, it was pretty good. Some of the dialogue towards the end felt a tiny bit clunky, though.

Very well,”” Eric sighed. “I shall bare the displays of emotion for tonight, but by tomorrow hugs will be limited to once a month.”

This is funny, but it sounds old-fashioned all of a sudden. Is Eric just teasing? Does he lapse i…[Read more]

@hybridlore

So, now that I’m going with this version, do you have any overall thoughts about the section?

@rae @raxforge I was kind of shipping you guys in my head already, but I didn’t want to say anything in case it was completely wrong. That’s cute though. 🥲💕

@hybridlore

Okay, that’s reasonable.

You win.

@ellette-giselle

1. It gives the reader more hope in a happy ending.

2. It’s more interesting because you play on the past events of the book to make readers think Asher and Eric will die, but then defy the stereotype, keeping them on their toes.

3. It saves Asher and Eric. 🤗

@hybridlore

No, you can’t just say that. Give me a literary reason why I should do this rather then the other one. Why is this better?

@ellette-giselle

YES! Much better. Thanks so so much!

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @grcr

ALTERNATE NEXT SECTION!!!!!

Please be honest as y’all read this, because saving the boys is going to be a HUGE change. However, I think it may be the right one, and some interesting things happened that makes me think so. However, I am still on the edge, a…[Read more]

@theducktator

How did you not know that?

lol.

It was pretty obvious. lol.

@whalekeeper

 

Do you wait to figure out the psychology of the character during the writing, or do you graph that too?

Not exactly sure what you mean by that……..

(Sorry, I don’t really do technical names. I just do whatever I’m going to do. lol. If that makes sense.)

@raxforge @theducktator

Yay! An excuse to talk about Andrew!!!!!!!

1. He’s really really really adorable, and I will not hear otherwise!
2. He has the best smile EVER, EVER
3. He likes nicknames apparently (really adorable)
4. He’s the most gentlemanly guy you’ll ever meet
5. He thinks his jokes are stupid when they’re actually hilarious (I just…

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@raxforge

#AnduthForever (Lord Willing)

Are you and @rae a ship now???

@grcr

HIIIIII!!!! Glad you’re back!! I was thinking about you the other day! Good to know you’re alive lol! 😁

Lol glad I’m still alive, too!

@whalekeeper

Yeah I’m doing pretty well! I hope you are, too!

@loopylin

Hi welcome back! It’s good to see you too. Makes me happy when older KPers come back <3

I don’t even feel like an old KPer but I gue…[Read more]

@liberty

I don’t think I’ll join, thanks for the offer, though (:

@loopylin

I love that!