@grcr
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 5 hours ago
Yeah, well “so far” is the key term, my girl.
We’ll see.
Either way, God wants us to share Him with others. Ultimately, He knows who is going to accept that gift or not, but that doesn’t change the way we should approach it, right?
I don’t think it should, but I’ve seen some people go at it like They are the ones s…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 day, 5 hours ago
I’m praying.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 5 hours ago
Sounds good! Yes, I think I get what you’re saying about Divine Election, but I don’t really know how it would change evangelism for me. Either way, God wants us to share Him with others. Ultimately, He knows who is going to accept that gift or not, but that doesn’t change the way we should approach it, right?
I’m also pretty…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 5 hours ago
*cough cough*
I knew that.
*wince*
Sorry i forgot! Okay, so I have an older age range. Good.
I would definitely like some advice (maybe later on) in how to classify these books. I was thinking YA, but that could include 13 or so year olds, and the violence level in these books might be to high for that. I mean, they are kinda dark…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 day, 5 hours ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 day, 6 hours ago
Kenna and Zeke’s kids!!!
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The Ducktator posted an update 1 day, 6 hours ago
Do you know the muffin man? I think he stole my muffin pan. I saw it in his muffin van; he’s such a dreary pain!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 6 hours ago
Glad to hear that!
I wouldn’t delete this, I need it for Joseph’s arc and to really set the whole stage. But, I’m glad you liked it enough for it to be a keeper weather I can trim it or not.
Btw, completely off topic, You’re 15? Right?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 6 hours ago
Okay, that’s two against me.
Glad you like the map!!
I’ll take a look at that section and see what I can do by way of trimming a few things up………
what do you think, @linus-smallprint ?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 6 hours ago
Yeah. I’ll see what @linus-smallprint and @keilah-h say, and from there I’ll make a decision once I have everyone’s opinion.
I think I could end up trimming things up a little if I need to.
Well, I know the belief in Divine Election is not held by everyone. Some people believe that anyone who chooses to be saved can be saved,…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 6 hours ago
Oh, btw, neat deduction! Sounds a little Sherlock Homsy.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 6 hours ago
Well, I would say now, except that @raxforge isn’t active at the moment so we can’t get his characters to move.
I guess give us a few in case he decides to make his way over here. Otherwise we might just have to abandon him.
No worries. It’s okay to call him Barron. I think i have his names down now.
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 8 hours ago
Oops, I forgot to call Baron Brutus in the rp. Sorry.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 8 hours ago
Klethen — Elderstrand (w/ Ilahna and Everett)
Klethen was about to reply when he was kicked to the ground. Despite being caught off guard, he was able to turn his fall into an awkward sideways roll and landed only slightly out of breath.
The stranger who had attacked him demanded to know where they were and pointed a sword a…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 8 hours ago
Totally gotcha. Sometimes it’s just good to get all your thoughts on a scene down, even if they don’t all end up in the final draft.
Sure. Hopefully you got what I meant, since this is kind of a controversial topic in Christian writing circles. In the end, it’s really up to the author who knows what’s best for their story h…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 8 hours ago
@hybridlore @keilah-h @linus-smallprint
For anyone interested, here is the current map.This is what everything looks like in this book.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 8 hours ago
Lol, I was wondering when you would start wanting the backstory.
First I’ll reply to yoyr note on the scene.
You might want to consider trimming it down, but if you can’t, that’s fine. Just try to think about what will move the character growth forward and work for this story/target audience specifically.
So, it wasn’t sup…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 8 hours ago
@ellette-giselle
(No kidding! It grows faster than a kitten!!)Yeah. Funny you mention growing faster than a kitten when I have one trying to eat my shirt right now (She literally has the hem in her mouth XD)
“You’re elbows are sharper then normal elbows should be.”
Lol!
@grcr @raxforge (the one who needs to rp) @ellette-giselle
Baron (Brut…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 8 hours ago
How did you know GRCR was RPing?
I used my superpower that allows me to see what KPers are doing.
jkjk
Actually, it was simple deduction. I knew from the community tab that she was still signed in to KP, and according to the Recent Topics tab, she wasn’t posting anything in other forums so I assumed she was simply typing a long…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 9 hours ago
wow. How did you know GRCR was RPing?
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