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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Yeah, it makes sense. It’s just interesting. If God sacrificed animals in place of Adam and Eve so they didn’t have to die, why wouldn’t the Bible just say that? All it says in Genesis is that he clothed them with skins.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Okay, so I did sight the Hebrew’s verse about death and sins, and then of course there are all the verses about sacrifice. But here’s the sinch.
The operative word in Gen 3:21 is עוֹר which occurs almost 100 times in the Old Testament Hebrew. It is used in only two senses:
skin of a human, eg, Ex 22:26, 34:39, etc
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hybridlore replied to the topic The potato army WIP. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Sorry I dropped off the face of the earth for a day. It was super busy.
Okay, sounds cool! And yeah, kind of creepy too 😂 Carrot Cake sounds like a character. I like how you came up with the different races and how they become empowered when they fall.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Ugh. Let me look. I’m horrid at references. Romans….. i think. Maybe Hebrews. Just a sec.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Really, lol. Hmm… I feel like other people do, too, but I’m not sure because I haven’t read too many people’s writing. But you’re right, most of us don’t for the most part.
Also, random question. What made you choose the name Kefa? (You don’t have to answer if you don’t want to.)
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Don’t worry, Julian is having all the same questions as you most likely are.
I can tell 😂
Interesting. I didn’t know animals were killed in Adam and Eve’s place, even though I knew about sacrifices later. Where is it referenced as the first sacrifice?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
No problem!!
Okay great! I’m glad the journal thing payed off.
Leon was a gladiator?? 😅
Of sorts.
Don’t worry, Julian is having all the same questions as you most likely are.
Um, when was this?
God required animal sacrifices to provide a temporary covering of sins and to foreshadow the perfect and complete sacrifice of Jesus…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Yayy!! It sounds interesting—a little creepy, perhaps, but I’m intrigued!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
I’m so sorry I didn’t get back to you yesterday! It was such a chaotic day and I didn’t get home until 8 pm.
I really like the way you handled their conversion through the journal entries! It was cool. Leon was a gladiator?? 😅
God slew two animals in [Adam’s and Eve’s] place.
Um, when was this?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @liberty
NEXT SECTION!!!
Okay…. so here is where I hit a slight problem. Leon and Julian use a very different script which is how you tell their writing apart. However, those fonts don’t transfer. So, I’ll italicize anything Julian writes, and have anything Le…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Yep!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Thoughts: Art, Illustrating, &c. in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
Okay! Sounds great!
I don’t digitalize. I just scan in, and I’ve never noticed blur. (I don’t notice blur on the ones you’ve sent us……)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
sounds interesting!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Up above.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Thoughts: Art, Illustrating, &c. in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
That would be so cool!!!
I know! I could never pay $2,000+!!
So, what are you thinking your rates would be? And would you do it by the hour or the drawing?
(I think by the drawing is prob. more up and up, because otherwise one could be prone to stretch the time it takes, not that you would do that, but ya know what I mean.…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
I mean I understand they have to have some water in order to live, but didn’t you say somewhere else that Azers don’t like water? Or did I completely misunderstand and that’s just a Ottoline/Naami thing?
So I’m not completely sure about that XDXD
Mainly, they just are very possessive of their lands and don’t want trespassers XD especia…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Girl you should legit be an editor hahahaha you’ve always been sooooo good with critiques!!!
Thank you so muchhhhh
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
YES PLEASE!!
would you…… would you possibly consider drawing RORY?!?!?!
I’d love to see how you imagine him!
You worries if you don’t want to tho. It can totally just be sketchy like the one you just posted. (I actually really like that look)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
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