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@liberty

It looks great! Aside from the things Keilah and Elishavet have mentioned… does he like music?

*remembers I made this topic* I will respond within the next couple days!

@whalekeeper

Vyette tosses her braids. “Why would anyone want a job if they could marry rich? I want to be the First Lady.”

Barnes, what is your most embarrassing moment? If it were raining tacos, would you eat them? (That last is my new favorite question. XD)

@elishavet-pidyon

I like older love triangles, such as Roy, Gilbert, and Anne in Anne of the Island,  or Rhett, Ashley, and Scarlett in Gone with the Wind. Modern ones drive me crazy.

evangelistic dating

What is that?

@loopylin

Celarent’s eyes grow huge. “I’d buy a red automobile! The rest I’d probably save to buy votes someday. Or maybe a house.”

Mel, who is the most annoying person you know? If it were raining tacos, would you eat them?

@elishavet-pidyon

Still haven’t got proof that she’s alive.

@whalekeeper

“Even for kings he comes”

@loopylin

Nar: “Of course. You can never spend any amount of time in my profession without finding someone you couldn’t help.”

@koshka

You alive?

Vyette struts in.

1. What is your full name?

Vyette Aramell Vallin [I think this is entirely different in my notes somewhere…oh well]

2. What is the most important thing the average person should know about you?

I am stunningly beautiful and my father has money.

3. What is your body language right now? [Describe them in the interview,…

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First person present writing. I’ve liked books with this style, but it’s not my favorite.

Romances where it takes less than a month for characters to fall in love.

Pop culture references. I hate it when books are full of pop culture references. Granted, this may be because I’m a very sheltered homeschooler and get none of them.

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Now it’s Celarent’s turn. Then maybe I’ll do Vyette…I’m having way too much fun with this.

1. What is your full name?

Celarent.

2. What is the most important thing the average person should know about you?

I am a man of mystery.

3. What is your body language right now? [Describe them in the interview, sitting/standing, fidgeting, etc.]

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@whalekeeper

I’m so curious about Barnes right now.

@grcr

I’m short tho, so height problems frequently plague me.

Same, Flaz.

@whalekeeper

I may do this for other characters that need more development, but I feel like writing in Ayla’s POV right now.

*Ayla screams* An interview? I shall be famous!

1. What is your full name?

Ayla Elizabeth Anderson [I may change the last]

2. What is the most important thing the average person should know about you?

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@whalekeeper

I can’t think of anyone important to do, so I’ll just go with Barnes

Ouch. Poor unimportant Barnes. XD

Wordy writing styles.

As Andrew can testify, more than once I have criticized books for wordy writing styles.

I’m not saying writers should state things as brief as possible, but writers shouldn’t take a paragraph and fill it with needless words. It bogs down the reader. There’s a balance between adding needless words and being too brief.

I think I did this with Silvanis…But I did punch him last night for no good reason so he might be pretty hostile so I’ll do…Nar I guess just cuz I was looking at an old drawing of her today

1. What is your full name?

“Narray Mae Nayhelm, but everyone usually calls me simply Nar.”

2. What is the most important thing the average person should…

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