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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Ahh! I love it! I’m glad they decided to go back to the village, but… 😬
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION!
Leon, Julian, Rolf, Aelic, and Roland remained with Heinrich and Johannes at the University for five days. It was a wonderful time of fellowship and encouragement for them all. The companions would have liked to stay lon…
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 1 year, 1 month ago
Sorry I kind of disappeared. Life’s been busy.
*Celestia stares with wide eyes… she is surprised how…. similar…? He is to her.* “Ahem, *Celestia cleared her throat* I have many friends! And… they are amazing. I feel like…. *Celestia pauses again* But I understand why you feel that way!”
*Celarent nods* I don’t see the use of fr…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Okay!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 1 month ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
I was thinking the same thing, but I thought maybe I was mistaken because the male version wasn’t coming to mind. 😂
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty @linus-smallprint
I don’t think I’ll be able to post today, and if I do it’ll be late this afternoon. I’m going to be busy all day.
Guns.
Yay!!!
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Are you okay in the forum Questions and Support 1 year, 1 month ago
I’m praying for you. Are you sleeping at least 8 hours each night? Life always seems better for me when I’m less exhausted.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Oh, my bad. When readers are reading the books without gaps in the middle, it would probably be easier, too. But yeah, just an intro to make it clear that it’s the same people would be great.
Thats what I’m thinking, but yeah, I can throw that it. I plan to release these as a box set all at once, so that should help.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
No, they haven’t traveled far enough for that to be a thing yet. So far they are all heading in the same direction together. That’s how I ended the last book. I can add some reminders though.
Ok, sounds good!
They actually left before that happened. (I said that in the last book) so they had no idea what even happened in the Cap…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Especially with the way that you left off the last book–with Rolf, Roland, and Aelic getting separated from Leon and Julian because they wanted to go visit their family (right?), I think you should remind us.
No, they haven’t traveled far enough for that to be a thing yet. So far they are all heading in the same direction t…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
I like it where it is as it is sort of the first rush of the downhill slide we’re about to hit.
Oh no.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
🤦🏼♀️
It’s the gang, y’all. The same gang from last book. The same gang we left at the end of the last book and are now picking up and the beginning of the next.
Do I really gotta remind the reader?
In the previous books in the series, the POV characters switched every time. Especially with the way that you left off the last boo…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
First time I’ve ever laughed reading one of your scenes. Poor lover boy Leon. XD
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 1 month ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Sorry! I was gone for a minute!
YAY!!!
Ooo, poor Leon. 🤣
I like this! I can’t wait to actually read it in the book! I’m super excited!!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Yes, because some of us are too stoopid to remember.
Oh.
Okay.
Rough as in violent, or rough as in not turning out the way you hoped it would? Guess I will find out.
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… defiantly violent rough, yup.Yeah……. and sad. And Brutal.
I know Hans, but who are these two?
Lieutenant Roth was the man Hans and his compa…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@ellette-giselle hehe, ok then🤭
(not a finished scene btw, but a snippet)
The Schind family looked exhausted, barely awake.
Not that Leon doubted that he probably looked much the same.
Thoughts of Germany had reawakened thoughts, memories, and even nightmares that plagued his sleep and sometimes even his waking moments.
He shifted on the…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
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