@grcr
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Three Ducks in a Trench Coat replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 4 days ago
You should be able to get in. My brother’s classmate does not have a google account, and he and my brother were still able to work on a doc together.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 4 days ago
yay!! I’m so glad.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 4 days ago
Either way, honestly. Whatever works.
I think it might still let you in, but I don’t know if you’ll be able to comment. I guess we’ll have to see. I’ll email you the link.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 4 days ago
Wow.
I gotta say, it’s probably not as much of a shock as some of the other deaths, since it really felt like you were leading up to this… but still.
Keilah has a good point. I do like how you made it more hopeful at the end, and the time jump is really interesting. It’s cool to know what happened afterward.
I’m glad Rowan b…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 4 days ago
Wow really?! I’m glad you liked it!!
I like the time skip too. Oh. Odd. The original one has reference to WWI-II. It must have gotten lost when I was editing. Well, I kept adding greats, and it was getting stupid, so I cut it off at 3. About late 1300s to early 1400s is when I’d place the stories.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 4 days ago
Hmm, that could work. I’ll try that.
Oh wait, what if he’s describing the painting and he was like, “it was from one of the kingdoms that has knights, obviously not here,” or something like that.
Or does that not work.
I don’t know if that similarity between Leon and the prince was intentional or not, but try to pay a…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 4 days ago
So my dad just finished your report for Alec last night. Would you like me to email it, or copy and past it here?
Also, I just shut down my google account, and when I did, I realized I can no longer access you book! Is there a way I can do that without google?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 4 days ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @linus-smallprint
Okay all. Ready, set, here we go!
NEXT SECTION!
Leon and Julian did not go back to sleep that night. They spent the remainder of those dark hours in prayer for their friends, the other believers, and even their enemies. They…
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Ruth replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
Do whatever. I’m not sure really what to rp atm, since I don’t think Kepha has rped to my last rp.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
I’ll jump on board any time.
Though, I don’t think Andrew will be able to since he will be gone almost all summer.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
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HighScribe posted an update 1 week, 4 days ago
I’m sixteen today!! 😁
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HighScribe replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 week, 4 days ago
Praying for you guys <3
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HighScribe replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 4 days ago
I’ll help any way I can (:
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HighScribe replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 4 days ago
Thanks. I might!
I know!!!!!! I’m a terrible author!!! 😱😭
Wait a sec…… isn’t it my goal to make the reader miserable? 😈🤣
I promise to send the next section today. Right now. I’m running final edits this very moment.
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Ruth posted an update 1 week, 5 days ago
WE GOT SECOND PLACE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Idk if you know or not, but Saturday (5/24) my crew and I raced a few boats on the Connecticut River. The boat I rowed in was a woman’s four, in the second heat of a race (meaning there were too many boats for the amount of lanes so they did two separate races but compared the times as if the…[Read more] -
hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 5 days ago
It’s okay. Sorry I keep nagging you, but… I feel justified. I’ve had to wait on that ending for about five days.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 5 days ago
Also, this is ‘As you know’ dialogue. Leon is telling Julian something he already knows in order to inform the reader.
is that actually bad though? I haven’t done it often, and I don’t see much of another way to get that info across. Plus, I’ve used “as you know” sentences before in conversation just to help listeners mak…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 5 days ago
I was trying, but I think I’m out of time today. I almost had it done too. 😥
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omg happy birthday!!! 🎂
HAPPY BIRTHDAYYYYYYYY!!!! 😃
thanks guys (:
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
Thanks!!