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Joy replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@dragon-snapper Aww, never seen Moana!
@perfectfifths  Keep guessing!!
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Hole in my Plot in the forum Plotting 8 years, 9 months ago
@Dekreel everyone else has some good ideas, and I second theirs. Basically, if you can bring in a side plot or throw in another antagonist to add more conflict and higher stakes it’ll keep your middle going strong.
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Joy replied to the topic I need a character's name! + other stuff ;D in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 9 months ago
@emily @photobloggergal Have either of you heard of the YouTube channel “Player Piano?” If you like the Piano Guys, I think you’ll like this. The pianist is named Sonya Belousova. She could listen to a song ONCE, and then play it beautifully! Even if she’s never heard the song before! She has done many popular songs like “Bohemian Rhapsody” and s…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers 🙂 in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 9 months ago
DEE-kreel… Ohhhh… Ah! I like it! Thanks, @introvert_girl, you just saved me a lot of awkwardness!
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Joy replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@dragon-snapper A Narnia movie? Pth I don’t know!
Here’s one. It’s not obscure but…:
“Hi! I’m Victor! Wanna know how I died?!”
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Joy replied to the topic I need a character's name! + other stuff ;D in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 9 months ago
@photobloggergal That’s so beautiful…. Teach me! Advise me! School me if you have to!
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Snapper replied to the topic Hole in my Plot in the forum Plotting 8 years, 9 months ago
@dekreel *processing*
Okay, so a middle of a story. I know absolutely nothing about Doctor Who, but I’m thinking you could add more clues as to whoever this Riddler person is (I skimmed the Thirteen plus Five thing, BTW). Some scenes could include traveling through this planet, searching for the answer to the riddle. Suggestions – 1) performing…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@dekreel @perfectfifths Yes. Yes. I was mean. Sorry. 😛
@lady-iliara *blink* I have no idea…
If I am to put a quote out there, then I won’t do another KP obscure one. One that should get this topic’s engine running. 😉
“It’s man’s discovery of Nunya.”
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Snapper replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers 🙂 in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 9 months ago
@introvert_girl Really? You liked Force Awakens better?

Aha! I’m not alone! I liked it way better than Rogue One. Just couldn’t connect with the characters…or the plot of Rogue One.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writing Letters Within a Book in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@shannon I am a little late, but I hope not by too much. 😀
So…letters eh? Um… With some of my letters I like to talk about what I’ve been working on recently. If your characters are Christians, they can talk a bit about God too. Also, big events, even if its something that only in the news. Coal mine news is certainly interesting. There…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 9 months ago
@cindygreen *bows*
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Joy replied to the topic Hole in my Plot in the forum Plotting 8 years, 9 months ago
@silverclaw-bonnetfolly Actually they meet Dekreel because he lives there, and the riddler specifically wants Time Lords (don’t ask why) which is why the Fifth is there too. He basically lured the TARDISes to the planet.
@that_writer_girl_99 The Thirteenth that I’m using is not the same one as Jodie Whittaker’s Doctor. This one is my Doctor. I s…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Hole in my Plot in the forum Plotting 8 years, 9 months ago
*grins* Can I just say that I really, really love that you’re using Thirteen for this? I’m so excited to see her on the show.
I can definitely see the problem you’re having, and I’ve experienced it before. I’d say for starters, you should explore the relationship between the Doctor and this Riddler person. Does he/she have a connection to the…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@epicaddie2 ‘Nother quick question: Is there a name for the “world” in which Rangers live? Like a state and/or country?
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@daughteroftheking Hi! Whew! It was getting spooky here all alone. XD
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Elizabeth replied to the topic First Fantasy Story in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 9 months ago
@emily I’m so sorry. I really did mean to get back to you earlier, but it looks like someone answered before I could.
My current WIP uses a bunch of different “fantasy” aspects. I’m not sure there are any characteristics that would properly define a fantasy novel in the way you seem to be thinking. A fantasy is something that isn’t real, so most…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
*sigh…* anyone else here?
@dragon-snapper @catwing @seekjustice @alia @perfectfifths @epicaddie2
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@emily It’s going okay… I’m trying to create the setting. Like he lives here and they live there and that island goes over there… It’s very complicated
Seeya later!
Hello, @winter-rose
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@emily Go on ahead! Nice to have company 😉 Working on your fantasy story?
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