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EmilySF replied to the topic THE WORLDBUILDING THREAD in the forum Fantasy 4 years, 4 months ago
Thank you so much for the advice! I might try that for different cultures/nations in one world! (I have three major ones, atm.) I have (*counts*) five different languages, besides the universal one (I think) and a similar amount of writing systems (based on the same basic runes, just different styles) and those come together with the…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Zoe
Corvina drew a breath, eyeing Zoe like she had done something wrong.
“Look,” she said, her voice soft like when Malcolm coaxed her before demanding something from her. “I’m not ‘ordering’ you to do anything. I’m just…letting you tag along, okay? That’s it.” Corvina spoke cooly, almost slyly, like there was a hidden trick.…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Nevermind, it’s gone.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Oops! That was only part, do you want me to go ahead and add the rest?
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Vulkasin and Zlatan
His brother’s face looked to be stone, the expression which meant he wasn’t comfortable, although he had returned his blade to it’s scabbard.
Vulkasin laughed. He couldn’t help it really. Not with Zlatan acting a complete Desanik beside him (Military officer similar to a sergeant). At first he tried to…[Read more]
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Lydia S. replied to the topic Favorite Scenes In Our WIPs! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Thanks for tagging me! This will be fun. 😀
I LOVED your scene!!!! Poor November… *stifled sob* Makes me curious to know what’s up with this journal.😉
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Wow.
Just… wow…
That was PHENOMENAL! BRAVO!!!
As a side note, I don’t believe I’ve met you yet. Welcome to the KP forum! I’m Lydia. 🙂
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Yes! XD I think they figured that out pretty quick.
This next one would probably be a good place for them to meet up with someone, whether Sofia or Lyn and Nyx.
Vulkasin and Zlatan
November stared at the strip in his hands with something approaching horror.
Zlatan didn’t notice.
Vulkasin desperately tried not to laugh,…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic Favorite Scenes In Our WIPs! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 and THAT is another reason why I must have my MC die: so I can use this scene. (But I was already planning on having him die, anyway, because that was the beginning idea of this WIP: to write a story from a mentor’s pov and still have him die.) ANYWAY… Thank you!!!
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
That’s such a perfect description of Vulkasin! (And their marching rations, hahaha)
Now for my part…
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Sounds great to me!
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
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Jaybird replied to the topic THE WORLDBUILDING THREAD in the forum Fantasy 4 years, 4 months ago
Learning languages can be really hard, but they sure do help for name inspiration!
But it doesn’t help when it’s all in the language itself. XD
I feel your pain.
For the reason I am replying to you is tgat I am learning Hebrew.
Now please note that that is present tense! 😉 I’m not very far in.
Sometimes looking up things…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic Favorite Scenes In Our WIPs! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Imma just share the only scene I’ve actually written for that WIP I’ve talked about and asked for some help with. So, here ye go, and lemme know what you think!!
The phoenix rose from ashes of his body, drawing all heat to itself, growing larger as it rose into the sky, leaving behind icy stillness.
Stoke watched from the hil…
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Actually, yes! Here it is.
“@elishavet-pidyon OH BOI OCRAN BE MAAAAAD BRUH XD
Jocelyn & Nyx
”Maybe give me a bit more warning next time before TOSSING ME INTO THE AIR?!”
”Sorry, love.” Jocelyn chuckled. “Though your expression was priceless!”
Nyx pouted. “You could’ve filled me in!”
“Umm, when exactly?” She…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Zoe
Corvina studied her for a few minutes.
“Fine with me,” she shrugged, but Zoe felt her eyes studying her. Picking her apart. Dissecting her, like Malcolm did every time. Perhaps even reading my thoughts. She let her eyes fall, ashamed.
“I suppose you won’t be much help if I don’t tell you what I’m doing here, hm?”
Ord…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
I don’t believe so, and I should know as this is the ONE book I’ve actually managed to plot.
Well, that poem popped into my head. In truth my story isn’t even similar, at least as far as I know.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Thanks! This is SO MUCH FUN!!
Ocran
”Lord Governor?! Two titles in one?!” She gasped in apparent admiration, “How amazing is that?! Nyx! Did you hear that!”
The beast wasn’t paying her any mind, of course, and instead was fairly foaming at the mouth in rage.
She stroked it’s head.
“Ah, ah, now Nyx, do be nice! Is that anyw…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Vulkasin and Zlatan
Vulkasin watched his brother standing still in the corridor, his head cocked, listening, as if trying to tell were the blast had come from.
Nowhere near. But a moment later there was something else, something at the edge of his hearing, teasing him. Vulkasin shook his head, it must just be some ringing in his…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Just going to make this clear, ZLATAN DOESN’T DIE!
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