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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@koshka @godlyfantasy12 @someone-im-forgetting
i tempted to pull Sofia out (somehow) now, because I have a much better idea of her, but don’t want her getting too developed for the WIP. I am willing to insert a different character from the same WIP if you want, because there are definitely a few who still need figuring out, but I’d probably wai…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon
Zlatan and Vulkasin
Alyona Mynclais. The first sounded like a name one of his cousins would bare, but Mynclais was certainly Southkingdomish.
He stood against the wall, waiting to be sure his troop had enough. Vulkasin was sitting on a crate but he still looked cramped at the table. Lyn and November…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @emilysf @koshka
Alyona
The group seemed to relax a bit, their surprise turning to… Many different reactions ranging from delight to something like anger. Maybe concern? She couldn’t tell.
BubblyNoiseGirl was on the delighted side. “Well! Hello there!” She grinned at Alyona with an unfazed open friendliness. “Thanks for sha…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @emilysf @koshka
Oh! I’ll try to oblige.
Alyona is about eleven, but nearly twelve. However, because of the same reasons that Viktor believes he’s thirteen, they think she’s twelve already.
She has strait-ish dark brown hair that almost falls to her knees when loosed but it’s usually in a braid(yes, it’s uncut). Olive complexion…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
To explain my over vague comment. 😉
The sea in which Yartass sits is inhabited by a navigating people called the VoyageFolk. They’ve spent so much time on the water, that they don’t see the attraction to living on land. XD (which will cause some humorous conversations later in the book when they make friends with some. We can…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon
Zlatan and Vulkasin
A girl rose up from behind the fireplace, nearly throwing the group in panic.
“Peace to you!”
Zlatan glanced over the rest of the room. No one else.
Her voice was quiet, with a soft lilt. “Whatever brings you to my master’s kitchen, you are welcome to join me in my meal.”
A serva…[Read more]
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Karissa Chmil replied to the topic Favorite Scenes In Our WIPs! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
OI. That was brilliant.
Eeeeeeeee. That was awesome, but super sad.
*blows trumpets* Dragons! Yay for dragons!
*gaspeth* Where might I sign up for November’s fan group? XP He’s awesome. And now I feel really bad for him.
Mine is rather short, but here ya go:
“Adrian, wait,” she says,…
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @emilysf @koshka
Hiiiiii! Good to have you back!!!
I’m so excited about this, it’s borderline absurd.😂
Alyona
The door flew open, admitting a boy, a gir who darted in front of him with a furry thing that weilded three tails and a twitching nose.
None of them Dorwains.
Alyona didn’t know what to do with such company. She…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Memes, Inspo, Aesthetics, Pretty Much Anything XD in the forum Characters 4 years, 4 months ago
AND I WASN’T EVEN TRYING!
I don’t know how it happened, considering all my
horrid8-13 year old beginner’s writing had female MCs. All of it.Yeah, I do that to. And I’m the author.
(Why did I do this to myself?!? =| )
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Hi! *Waves* that’s alright. I stepped out for a few also.
THAT IS PERFECT!!!! Exactly what Zlatan would do! XD
Now who’s turn?
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @emilysf @koshka
*Squeal of anticipation*
Okay, let’s see…
Alyona
The day had gone, and with it went the rest of he weary kitchen workers, all except for one small lass bent over a pot of stew.
Alyona absentmindedly lifted the lid and stirred it again. It was bubbling merrily away, sending up tiny whiffs of stewed grain. She…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @elishavetpidyon
Zlatan
The door broke open in a spray of splinters. Zlatan stumbled through, barely catching his feet again.
This new hall wasn’t much more than an arched and pillared walkway beside the central keep. In a few more steps they would reach the paved courtyard and be in sight of the moon.
He sighed, free…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Zoe/Snow
Corvina had chosen the way that the group had gone. Zoe followed it eagerly, sometimes hurrying ahead so much that she had to return to Corvina because the girl stopped moving when she lost sight of Zoe.
Four people turned to five and a woodland creature, one she was unfamiliar with but smelled…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@koshka @godlyfantasy12 (sorry it’s short, but nothing else came to mind to make it longer)
Sofia
She knew she could have helped the men, and she’d almost offered, but she wasn’t sure yet whether they would trust her enough or whether she felt up to it yet. Her panic from the stairs had left her shaken and feeling oddly weak. And she didn’t like…[Read more]
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Lydia S. replied to the topic Favorite Scenes In Our WIPs! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Aww, thank you! <333
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Lydia S. replied to the topic Memes, Inspo, Aesthetics, Pretty Much Anything XD in the forum Characters 4 years, 4 months ago
That’s beautiful!!!
*sobbing*
MY POOR BOI!!!!!! Grimm is pretty much the epitome of my favorite type of character. 🙂
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
AGH! I accidentally used my tag instead of- @godlyfantasy12
Why?!?
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
I can.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Oh! I just reread your question. Perhaps they should meet up here, but they could also find the door left open/slashed and think “That’s funny. We should be on guard.”
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
I’m not sure how sci-fi will work with my 10th century charies. If they do meet I think it should be after the kitchens.
But I’ll roll with whatever.
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