@godlyfantasy12
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Zlatan totally needs to get separated from his brother, and maybe Vulkasin needs it too.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
I think I’m okay now. The writer’s block was mostly situational (we had a family funeral, and I’ve been a little numb).
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
I agree. They need a little nap.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Eeeek! *Shrieks*
Honestly, I don’t know what Viktor would do if he and Franz get “acquainted”. Probably get himself in trouble, I mean, he’s only fourteen, y’all. (But don’t tell him that. He thinks he’s a year younger.)
Oh, and the way November’s getting teased makes me want to add in Alwin,…[Read more]
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic Book Topic Updates in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@godlyfantasy12 👍🏻😊🥰 What is your WIP about? I’d love to hear if you wanted to share!
@freedomwriter76 That advice is SO SPOT-ON! Love it!! 🙂
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Vulkasin
Please have a window, a ledge, something bigger than an archers loop! Well, maybe it it was tall enough… But he’d never get his shoulders through one of those. No way. Neyht. Nol.
Victor smiled. “Yes, there’s a window.”
Joy! “How high?”
“About ten feet.”
“Ah.”…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
A wonderful, hilarious mess. XD
True! Viktor would be relieved someone else shares his affinity for climbing.
As for the Scar Club… 😏 That’s soooo hilarious. I may have a few characters that would fit there. Maybe a couple.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
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Alyona
They were off again, at a more leisurely pace this time. Alyona plucked Viktor’s elbow.
“What?” He glanced at her.
“Isn’t the tower blocked off?” She whispered.
He shrugged – a sure sign he didn’t know what to say. “Just the door.”
“The door. As in, the entrance?” She raised an…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Crosshair
The girl proceeded to explain. “No. Yes….but not in our country. But in Dorwain, they sometimes do it.”
Dorwain? He’d never heard of it.
“A captain will sometimes brand his own soldiers. Especially if they’re captives.” She shuddered.
He almost felt like shuddering too.…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @koshka @godlyfantasy12
Ok, now I’m not sure where to take this. It’s fun any way it goes!
Alyona
Thank the Lord for Viktor. If only he could always be with her.
She hadn’t meant to draw attention their way. The situation had been frightening for a moment, but now the strange man was quiet and the Voyager’s were…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@koshka @freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Yeah, it’s totally fine. I can see why Crosshair’s rather judgmental voice is bothersome to the others; it’s kinda his natural tone, but they’re not used to it. I always say he has a “snake-like” kind of voice.
Crosshair
“Who are you asking?” Viktor snapped, narrowing his eyes. “If it…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
I tried!
Zlatan
“You would do well to leave the bite out of your voice.” the lad was gripping the hilt at his side, but he didn’t draw.
Zlatan quietly replaced his own blade. He liked this boy.
Slowly, Victor released his grip. “We need to find a place to wait out the night. I know…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
I don’t know if this was how Crosshair intended it to come across as, but I’m having fun so…
Alyona
Her heart still pounding, Alyona peeked back over her brother’s shoulder.
And met Crosshair’s gaze.
She slid back but not in time; the man had seen her and was suspicious.
Viktor
“What a…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Crosshair
One boy stepped up. “I am Victor Mynclais. I hail from Yartass, a son of Eirtan.”
Crosshair had zero idea where that was. Feather would probably know, what with her knowledge of weird places, but she wasn’t here.
“My name’s Jocelyn!” piped up one of the girls, the one who…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Ok, y’all. I’m sorry it’s been awhile. I haven’t been able to do much/anything on here this week.
All y’all’s responses are great! Now to do my part.
Alyona
From her brother’s protective shadow the scene before her looked both more and less threatening. Not that she could see much of…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
I suppose it’s a form of writer’s block. Some things are making it difficult for me to get into character right now, without which words just won’t come.
*Moan of frustration*
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
I’m sorry y’all. For some reason I can’t seem to get anything written and sent in. Don’t wait for me if you can help it. I’ll try to jump back in as soon as possible.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@godlyfantasy12 me, but only for a few minutes.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Ok, I’m currently writing this off the phone so forgive any mishaps in spelling, grammar, etc.
Crosshair
“Yeah, so long as you promise not to hurt anyone. So what’s your name?” asked one of the men.
Why would I try to attack you if I’m vastly outnumbered? Crosshair thought. Granted,…[Read more]
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Mary G started the topic How Many is too many Character!?!?!?! in the forum Characters 4 years, 1 month ago
Hey! I hope everyone is having a great summer!
I have a quick question: Can you have too many character in a novel?
So I decided to do a Carrie count because in the last year there have been a lot of uninvited but intriguing character barging in on my WIP.
I have 34 named characters!! Is that too many. Not all of them are in the same chapters…[Read more] - Load More
