GodlyFantasy12

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Vulkasin

Loud voices. The beginning of an argument. Shuffling feet on cold stone.

The barrack…

Something was digging into his side. Vulkasin tried rolling over, but the thing followed his movement. He finally forced open one eye.

The cross piece and pommel on his sword.

Why did I…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Awwwww.

My heart has melted.

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Yes, I’d say this has escalated. XD

Alyona

Screeches and hisses filled Alyona’s ears, driving rest from her mind. She flew to her feet, heart pounding, looking for a broom – anything really.

Two animals were locked together in feirce combat. Around them hovered two children, faced stricken…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 He won’t hurt Nyx too bad. He’ll claw him, that sort of thing, but his claws are too small to scratch deeply because he’s so young. He’s black, and looks a little like this:

(This is a different creature of the same type, called Stormcloud)

His eyes are on the stripe on his face ; they’re an orange-ish color although the drawi…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Aww, Naja is adorable. And she even looks a little like Riker!

I’ll go ahead and respond.

Viktor

Morning was here. Viktor lay perfectly still, watching the sunlight soak the walls.

His back ached, but his head had escaped injury.

He’d woken once in the… Earlier morning, just as he was…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76

Just going to do Jareth’s POV for now.

Jareth

“I’m Naja!” said the girl who’d found him. “What’s your name?”

“Jareth,” he said, but she didn’t seem to pay attention and was instead focused on Crow.

“Your puppy! He’s cute!”

Crow squirmed, indignant at being called a puppy, but Jareth…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12

Trauma club! I’m in, and so are most of my charries! I sorta like chopping characters’ arms off….Or blinding/half-blinding them…..You get the idea…..

Luckily for them and for you, Jareth and Crosshair haven’t gotten really mutilated yet. Unless you count the time Crosshair was…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Mikkel

Rat-tat-tat

Screams, loud garbled voices. Zeroing in on his target, safety off.

Another kick shatters the door. Three more steps.

His feet pound down the stairs, racing against time. Flames snatch at his legs, slowing him down.

Another door swings open sending a stream of…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I concur! That sounds like a good plan to me.

@godlyfantasy12

Grimmy? Oh my, that’s… adorable. I can see how Lyn is with nicknames.

(Of course they stay snarky. Brothers are snarky.)

@godlyfantasy12

But I won’t be for long, because I actually have to get up tomorrow before nine. (Or eight for that matter. Yikes! 😉 )

@godlyfantasy12

I’m on.

And I love your response, by the way! Nyx is hilarious, and the rest were just, oh my heart.

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Mikkel

This room wasn’t a very defensible position, but if the window was filled with sand bags- non-existent sand bags…

Hours upon hours of filling thousands of sandbags…

Mikkel lay down with his back to the door, his rifle beside him where he could keep his hand on it. With his…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Okay, so I’ll try to get things moving along.

Alyona

“Good night.” Alyona called after Viktor as he and the rest of the boy-men left the room the girls had moved to. It was right above the one with the window and Alyona couldn’t help but think that this was how a sheep must feel when her…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Good! (It was.)

Thank you, that makes me so happy. Although, not that I’m happy that you’re crying, which I wouldn’t be, but you know. 😉

That should mean it’s touching; that it moved my audience. XD

@godlyfantasy12

Ah, I love it!

*Sobs*

It’s so, so… Satisfying? Nit that she does, but that’s such a good way to build…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon

I was just about to ask if y’all could share why you did what you did….and then I popped back on the thread…and you already answered my question.

😥😥😥😥

Seriously, though, I love the way you guys used these deaths – okay, wrong word. PLEASE DON’T TAKE THAT THE WRONG WAY! What I mean…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I enjoyed that way too much. I mean really, why do I enjoy reading about character deaths? I despise tragic endings, and a book that makes me cry is probably not going to be high on my list of I just want tos.

But that…that was beautiful.

And now I plead for more!!!

@godlyfantasy12

Good idea!

Now is it why I’m killing him, or why the other characters kill him?

Why I’m killing him is that, well, it’s a little complicated.

When I first had the inspiration for him, it was as a serf that was killed for treason. This I always planned to kill him. However, after the story changed a bit and he became an MC, I…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Good idea. *Sigh*

Well, the why Oswald dies is…um…to move along the plot by making Mikkel try to commit suicide.

That sounds awful.

And this is why I feel so cold hearted.

There are other reasons…although most of them are about as bad.

@godlyfantasy12

Awwwwwwwwww.

That’s so sweet, but not in a sugary way, if you know what I mean.

And I love that there’s hope in it. Like I’ve said before, a hopeless death is worse than tragic.