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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @koshka
Ok, this is hilarious!
What does everyone think of my adding another character? (I know, that might make our already jumbled narratives even harder.)
She would be in the Buteries kneading bread, and she’d either be a 15 year old lass named Winifrith(from my other series), or Viktor’s 12(about) year old sister A…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
That made me laugh so hard!!! XD
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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@koshka @godlyfantasy12 technically, I guess, but you can go if you want @koshka. I’m going to be busy for a bit with rearranging bedrooms and cleaning them and stuff, so you can just have Sofia sitting happily with the children getting her hands bandaged and listening to Zlatan and Vulkasin. I’ll hope in if I get a chance, but I don’t know how l…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Alrighty!
Zlatan and Vulkasin
He’d done it again, gone off singing aloud with other people around. He sighed.
“That….that was beautiful.” Ara said softly. “What was that song?”
Zlatan shifted his shield, but kept his eyes out the window. “Forgive me, it vas, ah, song of ze seasons.”
“He just made it up and doesn’t v’…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Is Sofia next?
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Zlatan and Vulkasin
Ara knelt and began to tear a strip from the hem of her dress. Vulkasin started at the sound, “Vat are you doing?”
Zlatan understood his brother’s confusion; no Vulkish soldier would even think to bandage scraped knuckles.
No, not a vulk. Images flashed before him, for a moment taking place of the…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@koshka @godlyfantasy12 yes, Sofia is like 6’2”-6’4”. That’s a little bit shorter than (V-brother), but quite a bit taller than Zlatan. 🙂
(oh, and both hards are scraped up, but the right one is more so)
Sofia
“I’m guessing you’ve absolutely no idea why you’re here,” fox girl grinned. “It’s becoming a trend.” She hooked her arm around Sof…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Okay, let’s see how this goes…
Oh, and which one of the brothers is Sofia’s hight? Zlatan=nearly 5’8″, Vulkasin=over 6’7″
Vulkasin and Zlatan
Lyn was the bravest person he’d seen in a long time. Well, besides his brother, but Zlatan was a different kind of brave, a person who followed through no matter the cost.
But…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
It sounds a lot more in-depth than it probably is. 😏 I have lot more to go.
My ways?
A lot of mindless wonderings. And wanderings.
And spending a bit too much time in random history. I like gathering bits and pieces of real cultures and smashing them together. (And stealing ideas from other books.)
And talking it out to…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Oh! Sorry, you haven’t been there. 😉
I’ll try to explain.
There are three nations. No, make that four…
Let’s start at the beginning, shall we?
*Opens ancient scroll*
No, not that far back.
*Picks up a different one instead*
Wait, you just wanted to know what a Yartassite was, not the whole history of the Brother-Nations.…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Great idea! Yes, he is a high commander in the, ahem, “Eirtanian” army. *Eye roll*
It’s mostly Dorwainian. Of course. No Eirtanian loyal to the Brother-Nations would be at all willing to be in his army.
Which is actually even better, taking Viktor into the situation.
Viktor doesn’t like Dorwainian soldiers, and for good…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Memes, Inspo, Aesthetics, Pretty Much Anything XD in the forum Characters 4 years, 4 months ago
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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Sofia
“You’re bleeding!” the second girl gasped, speaking softly. The shorter of the two men held her back. The boy paled and looked away. The fox girl shook her head.
“Well, we’ll have to fix that! It’s nice to meet you, Sofia!” Fox girl smiled. “These are my friends.”
Sofia glanced down at her hand, quickly withdrawing it…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Memes, Inspo, Aesthetics, Pretty Much Anything XD in the forum Characters 4 years, 4 months ago
Aww… I was really scared for him for a minute there.
*Sigh in appreciation of another good story*
Hard themes? Oh yeah, those. I don’t have any of those. (Sarcasm intended) XD
Wow. I don’t know what to say. We need more of that type of story, TRUE fiction.
(I’m actually struggling with my story stuff right now, as…I do…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Sofia
“She’s not with them…”
“So … she?” The boy shrugged.
The fox growled low and the girl held him tighter. “Oh no … not doing anything … friend or foe.”
“Well, we don’t … do we?”
“Hiya!” The girl with the fox stepped out from behind the two men; they were clearly shocked.
“Lyn!” The othe…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
I know what you mean. XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Bwahaha…Nyx and Lyn…are great…hehehe…
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Koshka replied to the topic Memes, Inspo, Aesthetics, Pretty Much Anything XD in the forum Characters 4 years, 4 months ago
What’s going on with Paxton? *Stares at pictures in concern*
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Vulkasin and Zlatan
The brothers stared at the strange set, having apparently interrupted three one-sided conversations with the fox.
“Oh…ah, perhaps we should explain…”
Lyn glanced back at the creature. “Nyx, hush!”
Hush?
Ara sighed.”Ah…you see…Nyx can…speak, to us.”
“Sorta,” November’s hand was back in his curls.
Vulkasi…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Sofia
Someone cried out, their voice echoing into the hall. Sofia picked up her steps, overjoyed to hear a voice besides her own. Even though it broke the silence, it had become a small comfort to her.
More voices spoke, the words unintelligible and fainter.
She began to step faster down the lamp lit hall,…[Read more]
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