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*Comes flying into the tower window*

I’m back!!!!

*Lands in a crouch, cloak slid over one shoulder, green wool against a blue linen kirtle. Soft fabric on stone*

Because we can do all things in our imaginations. (Including owning said 10th century garb. *Sigh*)

Anyway, I have returned from my…[Read more]

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Trevyn

Trevyn smiled back. He could see conflict like storm clouds rising in Jayden’s eyes. Maybe this wasn’t the best topic, but at least he could actually feel comfortable enough around to talk to.

It made a big difference.

Even if it slammed the past in his face.

And it hurt. All over again.

Verity

Verity…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 That’s hilarious!! I AM SO DOING THAT!!

At least I will try……

@godlyfantasy12 Kind of clueless as to how that will look considering she has no idea who he is…And I still have to get her calm down some here.

Maybe I’ll just have to be internally fangirling as I read XD

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It’s so hard to figure out how to injure your characters without permanently disabling or killing them… XDXD

Anywho, here’s what I’ve got to share!

• Head wounds

Head wounds bleed A LOT and for a long time. A small cut in the forehead (probably no longer than an inch) by the hairline, caused by contact with a blunt object,…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 BUCKY!!! 😉😊😊😊😊😊

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I’m probably not going to be here tomorrow. I’m usually busy Thursdays….and I have a feeling the Castle will once more descend into chaos in my absence….

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Thanks, y’all! You’re really encouraging, and I’m glad you like it!

Yes, she is a bit hopeless, she knows deep in her heart that she’s headed for spiritual bankruptcy, but she’s seen so much already that she’s almost dead inside. It has a lot to do with the certain kind of things she’s involved in. Nasty, ugly…[Read more]

So, for tags! (Let’s see if I can remember them.) If I didn’t tag you, don’t feel like you can’t say anything, or if you know if someone who might like to help, then feel free to take them.

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You’re welcome! This is my favorite type of book research too, so thank you!

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Okkaaayyyy…*drags self back from hospital reports*

It looks like the wound is somewhat chronic, frozen in the stages just after bleeding, where the skin is sealed somewhat, but the wound is still open while no longer bleeding. which would make sense if it is painful from time to time. The magic would have to come in here as the…[Read more]

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Ooo, wonderful tension! The things authors love to create yet struggle to write.

It sounds good so far; the emotions seem balanced to me.

How would Ara respond to November being hurt? How did she want to respond to Riven?

At this point it looks like she’s about to explode, which could manifest itself in various ways depending…[Read more]

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Yeessss I love these points in books

*I offer advice based on elementary observations and a house full of constantly injured and nursed daredevil little brothers*

ahem. *places spectacles precariously on nose tip*

Shall we?

For a non-magical injury, he may be concussed depending on how hard he hit his head. If this is in…[Read more]

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I’ll need to check this, but it sounds like the wounds close up, but be scar tissue grows. Anyway I’ll be back on here once I’ve done some research.

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Verity

Verity’s forehead crinkled as Corvina brushed by her. It made sense, what she said. Sure, Verity was a bouncy, bubbly whirlwind, but sometimes she wondered if people took her seriously for all that. Was it true? At least she had someone who knew what that felt like, deep inside.

“Thanks again, Corvina.”…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 No idea where it came from…. 🤣 She’s beyond my control at this point…. XDXD

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Verity

Fine. If they wanted to bring that evil man along, it was their deal not hers. (Verity, where did this attitude come from girl?) She tossed a strand of hair over her shoulder.

That man scared her and angered her all at the same time. What if he’d done something to Trevyn like he had to Jayden? What if he…[Read more]

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Oh, by the way, Jareth can talk to Crow sorta the way Jocelyn can talk to Nyx, but it’s not telepathic. Also, Crow doesn’t have feathers, he has spikes and scales. The drawing says “As drawn by Feather” because that’s the name of the character who drew it in the story (she’s Jareth’s…[Read more]