GodlyFantasy12

@jonas

So, the king has been traveling for a while. He wasn’t aware of the rules put on the people by his regents, who he’d appointed to take care of the country while he was gone.

When I wrote it, I was trying to create sort of an allegory. I know it’s not perfect, but that’s what I was thinking when I came up with it. The king is meant to…[Read more]

@jonas @rae

I added a few sentences that hopefully resolve it a little better? I’m not sure. Do you still think it’s missing something?

… I can’t believe I didn’t see it before—who he was. The suspicion has grown inside of me for weeks, strengthening with each day that passed. When the guards disappeared from the marketplace. When the curfe…

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@rae

Alright! XD Thanks, I appreciate it.

@grcr

Got it!

@jonas

Yeah, I knew it was pretty obvious. I’m not sure how else to write it (where it’s not obvious) in such a short word count.
So, yeah. As soon as I posted it I was like, oh, I need to add something that talks about how the rules/guards have been changed. Really when I wrote it I was thinking it’d have a few more scenes, but then when I got…[Read more]

@grcr

Ugh, I know, that’s the worst. Maybe try Nameberry? I usually go there for names.

@grcr

I like it! Blair and Blaine are really similar names, though. That might get confusing, unless it’s intentional?

@koshka This is really beautiful!

@trailblazer

Oh this is so fun! Yeah, it’s after Christmas, but I’m answering anyway. XD

how do you celebrate Christmas Eve/Christmas?

Typically our church has a Christmas Eve service, so we’ll go to that. For Christmas Eve dinner, we’ll eat finger foods and we make a punch with Hawaiian Punch, 7-UP, and orange sherbet. Then there’s this cute…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I know this is late, but I’ll be praying for him too. That’s tough. ❤️

@everyone

What do y’all think about switching parnters for the next dance? Of course you can finish up your conversations and such though. 😉

@savannah_grace2009

Lukas

He shrugged. “Well when I heard about the dance I didn’t really want to go, but when…” he trailed, catching himself before saying something embarrassing. “Yeah, I think I’d still want to go as long as you do.”

@grcr

Oooh I love it!!

@rae

He sounds really cool!

@savannah_grace2009

I love both of those!! I can tell so much about these charries just from their boards.

And I’m assuming Rylee loves dogs or something like that…? She sounds pretty cool. 😏

Thanks, guys ❤️

@rae

XD

Hugo

“Right.” Her older brother seemed easygoing enough, if a little combat-centric and intimidating to some.

The two headed off into the mass. A slightly faster beat played, with just a touch of syncopation. Not all out, but energetic enough to sent a shiver down Hugo’s spine.

“It’s my turn to teach you a dance.” He backed away…[Read more]

@loopylin

I haven’t read the books yet, but my sister has them and I might sit down with them some time. I love the movie, it’s so underrated! ❤️

@rae

🤣❤️ It depends on what you mean by falling in love!! He likes her and would love to know her better.

I know, not head over heels yet, but he’s had lots of interactions with other girls so he’s used to initial heart flutters. He comes from a society where you go out on casual dates all the time. It takes a while for him to imprint on one gir…[Read more]