GodlyFantasy12

Hi! ❤️ Nice to meet you! I’m Whaley, what do you want us to call you? What kind of story do you want to write? Welcome to KP 🙂

@loopylin

Aw, yes, he needs to recognize that concussions even exist.

Oh, Felicity has a short fuse? XD

@rae

That’s hilarious, because Mars (Marcel’s nickname btw) would see Chase as the one to protect in any situation, even if Mars was the one in trouble XD

Calvin

“He’s missing.” Calvin kept his voice level. “But there’s no need to blame…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

I liked those! My favorite part was probably the worldbuilding and seeing how the fairy tales tied in to the series. You’re right though, there was a lot of romance. 😑

@jonas

Yeah those theories definitely make sense!

I agree on the fact that the Dawnshard was the most interesting aspect. I also thought it was interesting seeing how the Sleepless communicated, and more of what their goals are.

The rest was more simply entertaining in the Lopen-is-great sense

@esther-c

Heyy, I got it! XD That’s actually really funny and clever.

@whalekeeper

Oh noo! Hydration is important!!!

They are basically sci-fi retellings of fairy tales all jammed into one world. So like rupunzel, cinderella, snow white, and little red riding hood, but the stories have been adapted to fit a sci fi world. I do not recommend the second one but the 1st and 3rd have been really good so far! The main…[Read more]

@jonas

I’ve read them both, and enjoyed both, what were your other thoughts?

@esther-c

That is so interesting! I love the arcs, they sound really realistic. It’s kind of cool that Ami’s, Ev’s, and the villain’s main desire is for control.

@hybridlore

Yeah it is, actually. 😂 I didn’t want to write about someone getting married so I chose adoption instead. XDD

@esther-c Lol! For a moment I thought that first one might be based off of Esther from the Bible. It’s not, right?

Oh and for those of you wondering, Ami’s type 2.

@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @hybridlore @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @smiley @savannah_grace2009 @rae @grcr @anyone-else

Sooo… I was working on some “character-building” the past day or so, and I’ve fixed my MCs’ character arcs/internal conflicts to tie into the theme more and so I can write them better/more accurately. (With a l…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

XD

Wait, you stole cookies? 😝

Yes… *mischievous twinkle*

But my mum almost never minds, because I almost never eat sugar offered to me. I sometimes near faint because of low blood sugar, and I’m known in my class for never telling someone I’m hungry or thirsty until it’s too late XD

I’m doing alright, everything was kinda…

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@smiley

Ack! Sorry I’m late, but I finally found time to read this. M’kay…

So the one big thing that I noticed was a lot of telling and info-dumping. I could handle the information, but it’s not always enjoyable to read a bunch of backstory. Stuff like that should be sprinkled throughout. Besides that, there were a few places where things…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Of course! (:

@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore @highscribeofaetherium @jonas @anyone

Ok, so I have bad writing, but my worst writing I deleted years ago!!! 😭 There was three chapters of a book I wrote on my parents computer when I was like 7, I tried to start a few books when I was 9/10/11, I had an almost completed book around 11, but I still have a book I…[Read more]

@loopylin @rae

Okay… he’s in the shop next to the dancing building, literally next door. Just so you girls know. Cal saw it in his POV before coming in for practice. Not that anyone knows 😅

Calvin

“Spot on.” Calvin standing nearby snapped his fingers, and strode over to join the two girls and interrogate the nervous boy. “What’s your name?…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I think so! You can go ahead and RP first if you want. 🙃

@whalekeeper

Lol I thought you didn’t see my post but it turns out I didn’t get a notif because I’m now mimeralizedwritings😂

Hi!! (Sorry about seeing this only now, the KP ghost regularly eats my notifs)

Totally ok!

Doing okay, especially since it’s Christmas. I got some drawing books and a really beautiful art book by a guy named Omar Rayyan. A…

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@savannah_grace2009

XD Yeah, I could see that!