GodlyFantasy12

@thearcaneaxiom

I like it! Thing is my favorite, lol. I don’t think you should change the name even though it’s a little mean, but it’s up to you. I think it fits her and she likes it, so it works.

The plot is a little confusing to me… a lot of the philosophy/science stuff goes over my head but that’s fine, lol. Anyway, nice job so far! I…[Read more]

@loopylin

DANTE.

He always makes me smile. Always.

@calyhuge

Wow you caught on fast. I’m kinda amazed

It wasn’t too hard 😂😋

@rae

Okay, phew! Finally caught up. And yeah, Chapter 7 isn’t showing up for me… so I guess I’m not, lol.

The biggest things I noticed were again, really long paragraphs. I think it would be easier to read if you split them up, but it’s up to you.

And long sections of dialogue without tags, like this:

“You can…”

“Read, write, and speak i…

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@jonas

Okay, I actually don’t think I’ll join… Thanks, though!

@jonas

Oh yeah that’s happened to me before. Idk why. 🤷🏻‍♀️ If I have to edit a post, I’ll just edit it, copy it, then submit the edit just in case it deletes.

@savannah_grace2009

Aww, thanks!!

Plotting isn’t always easy for me, so that’s encouraging to hear. 😊

I’ll try to get to writing a RP later today, but I’m not sure if that will happen. 😅 I haven’t gotten to it this week because life has been pretty busy. 🙃

@rae

I like the one with the girl face silhouette!!

@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @grcr  @esther-c @jonas @rae @trailblazer

Kaine leans against the old wooden window sill. Steady rain patters the outside of the glass, obscuring the faint glow of starlight. He stares at the three moons hanging in the sky, creating a light reflection in the collecting puddles. Kaine presses his face onto the…[Read more]

@calyhuge

…

Is Narana who I think she is?

Oh ok thanks @grcr , that makes more sense XD are we just making up anything for this world, or is it a pre existing place already built out?

@trailblazor @acancello @grcr

Could somebody explain what’s happened/where they are for me lol? I think I missed something XD

@euodia-vision

Thank you!!

@trailblazer

I’ll check out your past posts and try to come up with some ideas!

@keilah-h

Thank you!!

@savannah_grace2009

If that is what happened, I bet she’ll try to rejoin… but I guess we’ll see.

@Euodia-vision 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Oh my goodness I LOVE those SO MUCHH 🤣🤣🤣🤣 I have at least half of them saved to my Marvel board (it’s mostly Bucky 😆🤭)

Tysm for sharing!! 🤩

@Freedomwriter76

AHHHHHH IT’S STEVE’S DAD?!?!?!?! Gurl….

I LOVE IT OH MY GOSH 🤩🤩🤩

And those memes omw 🤣🤭

and tOnY yOu BeTtEr TaKe ThAt…

@savannah_grace2009 @janellebelovedpig
Do you guys think it was an accident? Just really weird, she didn’t say anything about it. And she seemed like she was posting more often, too :/

@euodia-vision

Oh and I forgot to answer your first question. XD

Yes, they are. My grandpa was Persian, so I want to base this storyworld’s culture kind of off of that.

@hybridlore @grcr

Thanks!!

@savannah_grace2009 @euodia-vision

Sooo…what’s the big secret about Amir’s parents?

Hehe… Ok. So it’s a working idea, and it may change eventually as I flesh out the story more, but basically his parents are double agents. They actually work for the shah and are 100% loyal to him. But as part of that work, they pret…[Read more]