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@ellette-giselle

Ooh boy. This was a powerful section. Good job.

But Leon knew they had now made enemies.

Nothing would ever be the same.

Dun dun dun……. 🫣

@whalekeeper @theducktator

Praying!! <33

@theducktator

Praying!! 🙏

Sounds good! I vote A 🙂

@ellette-giselle

Yeah… I guess I typed your name in your tag a lot before the Cadwicks. I don’t know. It just surprised me 😝

@ellette-giselle

Yep xD

Oh, wow! Cool!

For some reason, my phone just recommended me to type “Cadwicks” … 😂😂 Lol. Who knows why.

@ellette-giselle

No! But just watch him. XD

I wasn’t expecting there to be a twist like that.

Yeah… 😅😬

It looked really cool! It must have taken a long time to write out all the stuff on the pages. Did you design the website or have someone else help?

@ellette-giselle

Great section!! 🥰 I liked the Wilhelm-actually-Prince-Deitrich twist. Pretty cool that he’s now a Christian… but it’s going to be very dangerous.

By the way, congrats on the publishing house! The website looks great!

@linus-smallprint

No problem, it just confused me and I wondered if I was misunderstanding.

Okay, that makes more sense. Lol! That’s really weird.

Yeah, I’m trying not to spoil anything, but it seems like it will still work… possibly. I’m not sure if the glitch on the page (with the mysterious text box) is the best way to go, but it will do…[Read more]

And also, nice drawing! I now understand. XD I thought she was a lot less humanoid.

@linus-smallprint

So when Alan joins The Faithful, and suddenly his behaviour changes (such as his reasons to fight), she is disturbed by this. To her, this kind of looks like he is giving up his independent thinking to some big jerk who thinks he has a right to do whatever he wants with the world.

Ah, there we go! That makes sense. Instead of her…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I like how that article covers previous names for the condition. That’s cool. 🙃

@rae

I was just thinking about art challenges today. I might not do all of them. 😆 But I’d try my best whenever there’s free time.

@rae

totally would be interested, ty for the tag! Let me know if you make it happen!

@linus-smallprint

“If you look at the code before, you will see the two dashes and the arrow indicating the end of a comment. . .”

I’m looking for this, but I can’t find it in the HTML box before the comment you left. I did, however, see this: class=”mt-2″ placeholder=””> –> directly below the comment. Is that what you were referring to?

So if…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Yeah, I gotcha. But it did catch me off guard.

I feel like he won’t … but I could be wrong. And if he betrayed them, he probably wouldn’t come back.

@freed_and_redeemed

Ohhh, they look so good!!!

@ellette-giselle

The new section looks good too! It did confuse me when, in the letter, they mentioned that Jews were not better than Greeks. This seems kind of out of place in your fantasy world. Maybe cut that sentence, or you could put, Ardentans are not greater than those of the Empire? Or something like  that.

Anyway, good job! I’m ro…[Read more]

I spent my whole shower time thinking about this and I can explain a little better. Taking quotes from Book 1.

Chapter the 5th

Tyn watched her friend. She did not know what to say to him. Every time he had gotten in a mood like this before, she had told him he had full control over whether or not he used magic. Now she wondered if he really might…

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@linus-smallprint

So you’re saying she is motivated by independence, realizes this command from the king makes her look controlled, and so tries to justify it through her own moral code to still feel independent? Makes sense. But is something keeping her from switching sides in the first place? (Just digging a little)