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MineralizedWritings posted an update 3 years, 4 months ago
What would ya’ll think of the title, “Afterthoughts of a broken heart”? for my second book? It’s almost a little bit cringe but it sounds much better than afterthoughts of a releaseor.
@freedomwriter76 @gwyndalf-the-wise @lightoverdarkness6 (If you’re not back yet that’s fine! 🙂 take your time!)
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Hi!! To all the writers out there who are graduating this year, congrats!
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Felicity replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
I don’t really have time for this right now so…
I realized I want my time on this forum to stay more writing related, so I’m just going to leave the discussion where it is.
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Felicity replied to the topic Book Lovers! in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
@anyone
Anyone read any books by Joel Rosenburg? He writes Adult Thriller novels about Iran taking over the U.S…stuff like that. It’s Christian, and pretty clean (there’s violence though) although I can’t speak for all of them.
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Felicity replied to the topic NICE PARENTS CLUB in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
Thank you, thank you for coming out and being brave enough to speak about your beliefs. This is a good thing, and you were very respectful and gracious. I personally agree with you and I really appreciate the way you talked about emotion and drama. This is so true.
I have always been hesitant to write about abusive parents/broken…[Read more]
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Folith-Feolin replied to the topic NICE PARENTS CLUB in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
Don’t stop, conversations like this are fun!
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
I don’t mind either way! And me and Light were talking and I think I’mma kidnap Asher to hang out with Serin and Kun’en for whenever she re-joins the Rp
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Enid replied to the topic NICE PARENTS CLUB in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
I need to stop doing this, I am going to lose some friends
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Enid replied to the topic NICE PARENTS CLUB in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
This isn’t something you have to apologize for, kay? <3 I am not the high and mighty word of wisdom. This is just something I wanted to talk about, and foster consideration. And your charries’ role models sound great!
@everyoneingeneral
I read all your posts, and thank you for spamming me, I enjoyed it, and am glad that people…[Read more]
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Folith-Feolin replied to the topic NICE PARENTS CLUB in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
You might find it interesting that npr did an article on why teens are drawn to dystopia novels. You can find it here:…[Read more]
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Folith-Feolin replied to the topic NICE PARENTS CLUB in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
@starshiness I’m pretty sure you are right. One interesting thing is that there is no overarching rating board for books like there is for movies or video games. Instead books are placed into the sections that they are by publishers, libraries, and bookstores. When trying to decide where to place a book (either the children’s, you…[Read more]
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Faith replied to the topic NICE PARENTS CLUB in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
Excellent point!
I’d just like to point out the parents in my story now.
So my MC, Arwen has both her mother and her father, both of which are very good parents. She’s especially close to her father. Now, while her parents are not dead, Arwen’s father, Ruben, does go missing for a couple years. So idk if that counts or doesn’t, but…[Read more]
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Euodia replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Tirion
Tirion gave Wrecker a nod, listening as the brothers chatted about their roommates and recent doings.
He glanced over at the other occupants at the table, then smiled as he saw Riya waving. He waved back and was about to walk over when a muscular boy came walking over.
“Hi, I’m Steve. Steve Rogers.” He stuck out his h…[Read more]
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Euodia replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @princesachronicle22 @keilah-h @smiley
Riya
Riya watched as Wrecker’s face broke out in a huge smile.
“I didn’t know you were here!” An excited voice declared.
Riya looked behind her and saw Tirion, along with two other boys who had similar wings and tails to Wrecker, come running over. She smiled and waved at Tirion, as a si…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic NICE PARENTS CLUB in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
@whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @godlyfantasy12 @smiley @freedomwriter76
That’s a really good point!!
It’s actually one thing that I was really excited to write about in my trilogy. The fact that Ami’s parents love her, support her, and are her role models.
She has a great relationship with her mother, and she looks to her father as so…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
@keilah-h @loopylin @kyronthearcanin @godlyfantasy12
Derek
Derek watched as Ridley ran down the hall. He had a fleeting thought to chase after him, but he decided it was best to let him be.
Derek ran a hand through his hair and looked down at his dark combat boots. That kid… something was, not wrong, but different about him… and that som…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
Ami
Ami had a small smile on her lips as she walked back to her dorm room. She was glad everything with Ev was straightened out. Maybe he wouldn’t care as much when Clint asked her to the dance.
Her thoughts came to a screeching halt.
When Clint asked her to the dance…
It was more like, if Clint asked her to…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Yep, what they (@kyronthearcanin and @euodia-vision) said! XD
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Euodia replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Feel free to have your villian(s) join @freedomwriter76 and my bois!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
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I like it, but it reminds me more of a romance novel than a dystopian, but that’s just my opinion.
Afterthoughts of Regret
Afterthoughts of the Shattered (this one’s kinda vague but could also refer to being broken emotionally)
I do like Afterthoughts of a Broken Heart, though. =)
@freedomwriter76
ok, thanks! <3
@gwyndalf-the-wise
XDXD it is basically a romance. It's dystopian, but most of the entire plot is about Layson trying to find a wife. It follows him on a really long journey as a releasor, but it's established early in the series having a family is his most important goal.
<3
XD Nice! Than I vote definitely keep Afterthoughts of a Broken Heart, it fits!