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@rae

🙁

I say loopy’s pictures and I thought maybe it would work lol

@rae

I’m glad! I hoped I made it clear enough.

yes, it was pretty clear!

What about pacing? Does it go to fast?

it did seem to go a little fast, but i don’t think it was too fast.

the only thing that still jumps out to me is a handful of the sentences at the beginning. i don’t know how to describe them, maybe… clunky?

Once down to the road, he…

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@smiley

So uh… I saw it in theaters, and I was younger and naive and thought it would be a regular Avengers movie where they win and everything is happy

oooh, dear that would’ve been an experience. XD When we watched it for the first time I told everyone afterwards that I couldn’t imagine watching it in theatres and not having Endgame to jump t…[Read more]

@rae

That was a lot better! I found it a lot easier to follow!

@smiley

Infinity War makes me sob way worse than Endgame

i was in shock the first time i watched it. i mean, i had a basic idea of what was going to happen but i didn’t know HOW bad it was going to be!

mostly because of a certain… Wanda&Vision (it’s like one of the saddest scenes in MCU history)

and Starlord is also put in that position with Gam…

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Aww man pics aren’t working for me 🙁

@esther-c

Ohhh, lol. I think we’ve actually seen one of those before! I think it was called My Stick and it was about Yoda and his stick. 😂

yessss, that’s a good one too!

@savannah_grace2009

I really liked that!

Lilitu and Sef are amazing together XD

and guys… we’re gonna watch Infinity War tonight and idk if I’m ready…

@freedomwriter76

but I’m over here thinking about how Steve will come out of the Blip and realize that he’s lost

I WAS JUST THINKING ABOUT THAT

Initially, I just thought of Bucky but then I was like, wait, wait, wait, STEVE! 😭

but everything you and @smiley are saying is very true!

But still, Steve’s gonna loose Bucky TWICE!

and this new…[Read more]

@loopylin

wow, 11 hrs is a lot! That’s cool it tracks your time

@loopylin

Noooooooooooooo…

I’ll go kiss a chicken.

@rae

Catching story. You have peaked my interest. 🙂

A critique,

“Suddenly, the form moved, throwing a knife that hit the boy straight through the heart. A cry barely escaped the boy’s lips as he fell, dead, directly at the slave girl’s feet. She stared into his dead eyes and cowered. ”

How do they/you know the knife when straight through his…[Read more]

@loopylin

You’re getting better!! I can’t believe you spent so much time on it (…altho I’ve definitely done that too 😋)

Wait lemme guess

It’s Ellie

If I get this wrong I’mma kiss a chicken

@loopylin

Wow, it looks amazing! Also sooo time consuming XD

@smiley

Ok. I’ll think I’ll have Ev meet up with some other guys… if there are any for him to meet. XD

Ev

“It would be, wouldn’t it?” Falon said with a small laugh. “But I wouldn’t get my hopes up, after all, how much can you trust rumors?”

Ev nodded to the side and smirked. “True.”

In a few steps, they had entered the bustling mall, surrou…[Read more]

@euodia-vision

Ohhh, lol. I think we’ve actually seen one of those before! I think it was called My Stick and it was about Yoda and his stick. 😂

@savannah_grace2009

Fynn

“I’m not sure, exactly,” Liv shrugged. “It might just be on a different planet, though it could be different galaxies.”

“Hm, interesting,” Fynn said. He hadn’t really t…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

it will probably be Bucky

😭 i knew itttttt

AND I WILL BAWL MY EYES OUT WHEN I WRITE IT AND I WILL CRY FOREVER, OKAY!? I’M NOT HAPPY ABOUT IT EITHER, BUT BUCKY WOULDN’T LET SAM SACRIFICE HIMSELF WHEN HE HAS A SISTER AND NEPHEWS TO SURVIVE FOR!!!

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

BUT THAT DOES MAKE SENSE AND BUCKY WOULD TOTALLY DO THAT FOR SAM…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

ohhh Asgard will be interesting …