GodlyFantasy12

@rae

Coolsies 😛

Violet

“Gage, record.”

The robot’s eyes spun, clicking, and gazed sightlessly at the surrounding lawnscape.

“The experiment was a positive until power failed.” Violet bowed her head, hair falling over her chest. “We’ll try tomorrow. But at least, for now, we can get some key lime pie or something. Forgo any further advan…[Read more]

@esther-c @loopylin

Same thing here! I’ve been told to play sports and I’ve made… interesting attempts XD You may have been grumpy, Loops, but I’ve always been the player who was too busy watching a butterfly to notice an incoming ball.

And I mean that seriously, by the way. That exact scenario happened to me twice.

@koshka @loopylin

*Watches…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I knowww, but I still love ittt 😂

@loopylin @whalekeeper

…y’all should play volleyball… just sayin’…

Height’s always helpful in that sport… XD I don’t exactly have the height, I’m only 5’ 6’’, but I’m working on my vertical >:]

@beth-torres

Easton

He laughed. “I can’t be as specific, but yeah, we’ve been here for a few days.”

They fell into another awkward lull that Easton…[Read more]

@theshadow

Yes! I’ve watched the one with Gerard Butler in it. I remember it being good, but it’s been a while, so I can’t think of any specific things I liked or didn’t like about it.

@savannah_grace2009

Woah, woah, woah, woah, woah, waittttt.

WHATTTT???

I seriously love that idea though!!! It adds a totally different dynamic!

@savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @smiley

Oh yes Sara!! I do that allll the time! I’ve had multiple conversations with real people in my head, those conversations just never happen with those people irl. XD

@rae

I almost said that I’m going to try to do this, but then I would have an excuse to not do it. Sooo… I AM going to do this! It think this prompt will stretch me a little bit, but it sounds fun!

@theducktator

Aww, I know, he’s the best! 🥹

@freed_and_redeemed

I think YA totally works. YA includes more than you might think. In our library, I find stuff in the juvenile section that should be in YA, and stuff in the YA section that I’m little shocked to see, but it def wouldn’t be considered adult fiction.

So yeah, in short, I think your books would be young adult fiction.

@freed_and_redeemed

I wanted Invisalign, but apparently my mouth isn’t big enough for all of my teeth to even fit in my head, so I’ll probably have to get braces and spacers 😅 I meannn, I had a dentist tell me that the molars that were supposed to come in when I was 12 never came in bc there isn’t enough room in my mouth 🤷🏻‍♀️

seriously thoug…

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@koshka

I’m totally good with it 🥰 Good to see you around again

@freed_and_redeemed

Rikerrrrr!! Yes yes yes yessss ✨

@savannah_grace2009

Waitttt, that’s not a bad idea!! I’m definitely going to consider that. My original idea that I’m working with now is that Hallie ends up joining/hanging out with a group of girls who are “popular”ish. They give her advice and pretend to be nice to her. In fact she ends up spending a lot of time with them since all her other…[Read more]

@trailblazer

Thanks!! The foreshadowing and pacing in this book is definitely stretching me and it’s been a learning curve, but I’m slowly figuring it out. (I think… XD)

@savannah_grace2009

Aww, thanks!!

Um… practice? I don’t know, but honestly it’s just practice. XD Now I will confess, I used to throw tons of action tags on dialogue an…[Read more]

@theducktator

I love your signature 🤣

@theducktator @koshka @keilah-h

Brace adjustments XDXD They put in these rubber bands two days ago and now I can’t chew.

Okay, keep in mind most of these are optional! I’ll make sure to note which ones are grammatically necessary, and you can assume anything else is just to give the reader’s eye a rest where it is the most logical.

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CHAPTER 1-LAXAN INVASION

!0,015 GA. The city of Laxan on the planet Laxor…

Billowing smoke filled the air. Lava spewed from t…[Read more]

@rae

All your replies are noted ;P

I saw somewhere that you have trouble with paragraph breaks. I love sequencing sentences, especially dialogue sentences, so I’ll give you some suggestions here in just a sec.

@mineralizedwritings

Oh my goodness Min they are SO adorable🥰🥰  I love your writing so much girl!!! <3

And I’m so sorry I haven’t been very active😭 I have started trying to write more frequently so I’ll hopefully be on more <33