GodlyFantasy12

@loopylin hehe it really is

@koshka @ellette-giselle

Flash fiction is fun. I think like Koshka said, you have to skip all the introductions and try not to be too plotty. I remember my first attempt at a short story was too plot-focused, with a bunch of plot points, and I just managed to shave enough words off to keep the limit.

Actually I think…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle OOH! Looks cool! 😁

@liberty I would say yes, but it’s kind of fun to watch as they multiply from the original two, and eventually we’ll get to the point where we have a lot flying. So no, sorry. You’re welcome to ask for tags though.

@ellette-giselle

I guess I was sort of confused by Joseph’s fears about talking to Ezra, then. He seems to have multiple flashbacks to the soldiers, which is a good way to show how the events have affected him. I was probably confused (I’m assuming now that this scene is replacing the one before where he talks to three young men) about why he was…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle Your new blurb sounds so cool! 😍

@ellette-giselle

I like it a lot! The only things I noticed were that you included the long excerpt from the Bible again… most readers already know the Christmas story so I don’t think you need it in there. Then, also, when Amelia was talking about Mary, some of the tenses seemed wrong. Like, maybe it should be in past tense? Idk. And last thi…[Read more]

@liberty

We watched a little bit of that cartoon recently, lol. Redwall was such a phase for me when I was 10-12; I read almost all the books, and I thinky favorite was Loamhedge or the book with the magical pearls.

Netflix was going to make a movie or television series more recently, but there hasn’t been any news in a couple years.

@ellette-giselle

We need a “pin post” option.

@jonas

That definitely makes sense. When there’s one big group, it’s kind of hard to RP. I’m up for it.

@ellette-giselle Haha I use my phone a good amount of the time. 🤪 It does take some getting used to.

Lolol, that should be the official video of the forum. 😆

Guys, I will write a praising, all-adoring ode to anyone who roleplays next! On my honor I will.

@loopylin I remember that guy; you’ve drawn some very cool doodles of him before. 🙂 I didn’t think you were going to integrate him into the Fel&Lois story, but it makes sense.

Oh yeah, and Chase (and Marcel) are 🤕💀

As always, hehe

All I remember is that Dante and the Society are in a kerfuffle, Leo and Rory are long gone escaped across buildings, and the new school officer is checking everything. Also the twins are still washing dishes alone. I should help them.

@liberty I think Ellette meant to tag you for her answer ☝️

@hybridlore

I’m glad it’s a little intriguing! He wrote it because he always told himself he would, but he has weird physical and mental conditions that make it hard for anyone to take him seriously. He’s trying to feel content.

The letter isn’t even going to make it to the school because of plot conflict.

Gosh, writing that character with a serious voice feels so rusty.

@whalekeeper

Wow. That was kind of confusing without context, but intriguing character. Why is he writing the letter if he knows he won’t go to that college?

@theducktator

Lolol. Is algebra really that bad? 🤪

@loopylin @hybridlore @godlyfantasy12 @anyone

Might as well post this because there’s no place for it in the actual story.

This letter is written by an aged-up character who knows he won’t get what he wants. He’s basically too weird and off-putting to be seen as a normal person. He is trying very hard, though.
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To: The professors of…[Read more]