GodlyFantasy12

@godlyfantasy12

Oh, okay…

I guess… Just maybe think about it, if you ever become comfortable enough? I can’t tell you what to think about, only that we should approach everything with truth-filled eyes.

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Yes I did, the pastry tart metaphor was.. illuminating XDXD I loved it!

@godlyfantasy12

Here’s the thing… In the Bible, you can see many places where the word evil is used interchangeably with the word sinful. The word evil can be used for different things (sometimes with a whole different meaning entirely) but it is used to describe sin.

I would say sin is profoundly immoral and wicked. After all, we should spend…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

MA BOI RIKER NOO 😭😭 ok that was really good though.

@godlyfantasy12

Insecurities.

Okay, here’s the bread and butter of it when it comes to my personal opinion –

I agree with you that they can be used as a character flaw, this is more of a tangent –

I feel like they comprise ninety-percent of character arcs in modern day YA, and I… kinda want the scales to shift? 😂 Is that just me?

Like, I…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Okay, I’m so glad we straightened that out 😅😂

That is MY bad by using that word in that way, and I apologize.

So I guess what I mean is:

Active arc: Triumphing over a sin you didn’t know you had

Passive arc: Learning you didn’t have a sin you thought you had

Does that make sense?

@godlyfantasy12

OH MY GOODNESS I just realized… I think we’re each using the word “flaw” differently

I’m using it to mean, “sin”

Is that what you mean?

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Also I’m sorry for arguing this late. I shouldn’t be going to far into this, when I’m not absolutely sure if I’ll agree with my past self in the morning XD

@godlyfantasy12

LOLOLOL 😂😂😎 There ya go, do with it what you will ❤

So…

Is there some way Zolten’s death might connect with November?

(I mean, fundamentally he’s on the same path as Ara, but it would be nice if it meant something specific to him, too)

…Maybe something to do with November’s dad? Idk.

@godlyfantasy12

*Pulls back* Okay, I’ll slow down…

First off, “influenced by others” was probably not the correct choice of word.

Being influenced by others can indeed be a flaw if you take it too far, make all your decisions based on others, etc. But that’s not what I meant. I just meant any normal influence in general. For example, it’s…[Read more]

I thought about my whole character arc thing for a little while longer (went to the pool and mulled over it in the unfortunately cold water) and found another type which might be considered an “in-between” but is really just Passive.

I should think of better names than Active and Passive, if I’m going to be so passionate about this……[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Lol yeah ❤️

So in this book, Ara and November both have a fear of the unknown, but Ara has a more specific fear relating to her responsibilities as a leader, and November just has all that extra baggage.

Sooo all we need to do is think of inciting incidents for each of them, that have to do with their individual development!

If…[Read more]

@grcr

Ooh, awesome! I love Narnia!! 😁 Haven’t read the rest of those, but I know of some of them… Yeah, me too XD It’s really hard to pick.

Cool! What’s the fictional world like? I’m assuming it’s fantasy, xD

Amazing, I LOVE sci Fi!! Fantasy is pretty good at times, too.. have you read KOTLC?

XD Yeah! I was just trying to think of different…[Read more]

Oops, forgot to tag people lol

@highscribeofaetherium @freedomwriter76 @esther-c @euodia-vision @smiley @acancello @whalekeeper @kyronthearcanin @thearcaneaxiom @mineralizedwritings @literally-everyone

@rattie

Welcome to kingdom pen! I’m hybridlore, a homeschooled Christian teen girl and writer, I’ve you haven’t already guessed XD

Some newbie questions for you!

Favorite books/series?

What’s your WIP about? (Work in progress, or whatever you’re writing currently.)

Favorite hobbies?

@grcr

Hi Julia! Nice to meet you! I’m hybridlore, also a homeschooler, Christian teen girl, and writer.. if you haven’t already guessed 😅

Ah, don’t be nervous girl.. everyone’s amazing on here! We’re all just here to hang out and help each other 😊

Some newbie questions for you!

What’s your favorite book series/books/authors?

What’s your WIP…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

and yeah, I’ve heard that it’s really hard. i’ll definetely pray that your family continues to have the strength to do something so beautiful for these kids 💕💕

It’s the main reason people try to adopt kids that are really little because though they’ve been through trauma too, they’re younger so they don’t seem to carry as much b…

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@hybridlore

Okay! And if email is easier you can just shoot me a message whenever you have something you need! 😁

@smiley

Love, love, LOVE the Bucky&Yelena board!! 😍

And the Pietro fanfic is 👌😍

@freedomwriter76

YES, YES, YES

OH MY GOSH I LOVE THIS IDEA! I MUST HEAR MORE!!!

FRIENDS

GUESS WHAT

I had a… I don’t know… revelation XD About story mechanics!! I had it like, a month ago, and I dismissed brain-storming further because I was busy. But now…

Okay, so think about this.

There are so many kinds of character arcs, right? Rags to riches, redemption, etc.

But have you ever considered other, additional ways…[Read more]