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Snapper replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
You know you’re a writer when the very presence of book is inspiring.
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Snapper replied to the topic A Catwing Christmas in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@catwing Meant to say that I really enjoyed that last installment. 😛 I like how you portrayed me as that overly-protective, bad-cop type of dragon.
Because that’s what I am. 😉 😀 Awesome.
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Joy replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@filewriterbase13x *appears from realm of the hiatus*
HiFileWriterIloveyourstorysofarcanIbeinittooit’sokayifit’stoolatethankyou!
*disappears again*
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Ben Powell replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
@filewriterbase13x It’s not that I didn’t like Madelyn. I just found Frederick especially interesting. 🙂 Sorry if I’m being too critical…the story is good.
Ah, cool. I was wondering about that a bit, but I haven’t seen many typos. Part Four made me anxious for the next one.
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LivGiordano replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@filewriterbase13x Yes! That’ll totally work! And I know what you’re talking about.
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Ben Powell replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
@filewriterbase13x That’s a nice start to a story. Here’s my honest critique.
1) I would almost say it’s too detailed. Let me explain: in chapter 1 there’s a lot of backstory and explaining of the MC’s past. To me it kind of bogged down the story. I would suggest telling some of it but saving other parts for later. It would also increase…[Read more]
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LivGiordano replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@filewriterbase13x ooh yeah! I would love actual Rapunzel hair. And I’m gonna leave the character up to you. You can elaborate a TON if you want. I totally wouldn’t mind you adding in anything extra, but I can’t think of anything I would like to add in particular.
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LivGiordano replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
@ariel-ashira I just sent it to you! Let me know if you get the email okay.
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LivGiordano replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
@ariel-ashira I just sent it to you! Let me know if you get it okay. 🙂
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LivGiordano replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
@ariel-ashira Oh really? That was you? Congrats on getting published! And I really enjoyed your poem! XD. I’ve tried memorizing Broken. And I’ve only gotten like the first two lines.
Yup. I beat you too it. 😉
So…I would rather not let the whole world see my work, so could I share it with you through Google Docs via email?
Lol. Yes, @filewrite…[Read more]
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LivGiordano and Ariel Ashira are now friends 6 years, 7 months ago
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LivGiordano replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
@ariel-ashira Aww really? I feel so honored! And I needed to hear that today. It originally started out as just something I wrote for myself out of my heart, but after sharing it with a few friends, they said I should submit it to KP. And so I did. 😉
I can definitely share some more of my poetry with you if you’re interested. 🙂
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LivGiordano replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
Yes, I am! @ariel-ashira
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LivGiordano replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
Lol yes. @filewriterbase13x is a very good friend. And if you don’t mind me mentioning it, I was the one who recommended that she should join. 😉 This place is pretty cool. *high fives back* And yes, I can definitely say that you’re one of my best friends, girl.
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LivGiordano replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
@filewriterbase13x I would totally go for this if I hadn’t already read it. 😉 *nods* To everyone else, go for it!! It’s soo good.
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valtmy replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@skredder @ariel-ashira @rochellaine
Thanks! 😀
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Ben Powell replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
@filewriterbase13x So, you “truly lost your mind,” you might say. 😉 Nice.
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valtmy replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
Hey guys I have a prayer request. I have a project at school as well as upcoming exams that I am struggling with. So if any of you can pray for me I’ll really appreciate it. Thanks!
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LivGiordano replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 7 months ago
Can you fit me in, @filewriterbase13x? And I think you know me well enough to figure out how to portray me accurately. 😉 I LOVED those. They were so good.
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SleepwalkingMK replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 7 months ago
@seekjustice I’m so sorry, but this week has been really busy and I haven’t been able to read the rest of Stars Fill Infinity yet! 🙁 I have a long train ride tomorrow though, so I hope I’ll be able to catch up then 🙂
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