Grace H.

@seekjustice

Oh, speaking of the odd lifestyle of the Verde family, it randomly occurred to me why you might be struggling with wordbuilding more compared to other dystopian writers.

Most dystopias use an average Joe type of character as a POV to show how life is like for an average person in the dystopian society. But since your POV characters…[Read more]

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Re Sapphire’s mother: If Jean is a fugitive, I do think that the circumstances of her leaving her husband should be different and not so simple. But hey, if all else fails you can always just say that she is dead and thus won’t be complicating the issue to increase your parent body count. 😛

I’m still amused by how dependent this…[Read more]

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You’re probably asleep now so I’ll just post my response here for you to see later.

Yes, there’s something really off about the notifications for some reason.

Oh wow the thought that there’s someone out there who is eagerly waiting for the next part of QOD is really terrifying. 😛

Anyway, regarding your idea for Jean’s…[Read more]

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Oh no! At this rate, I won’t be able to read Wattle Fire for a long while!

But I suppose I have no right to complain, considering my own progress with QOD. 😛

But what problems are you pondering? I am curious to know. You got feedback from all your betas already right?

@seekjustice

Hey sorry I disappeared. Was at a home visit. It’s getting late for you but are you still around? 😛

@seekjustice @rochellaine @catwing

My characters’ names are all not in English and I have so many characters… So I always turn off grammar and spelling check. 😛

@seekjustice @rochellaine @catwing

I’ll need to go out now so I won’t be able to word war again but I should still be able to chat. 🙂

@seekjustice @rochellaine @catwing

308 words.

@seekjustice

How are you intending to procure the tears of traumatized readers to make your potion if you go down this path??

I might be able to join the word war in a moment.

@seekjustice

You’ve really gone soft, if you’re basing your decision to kill your character in the future on whether you get attached. 😛

@rochellaine

Haha I think things will get slightly better for Myeongwol for now. How’s Bathshua?

@catwing

Good to know that we are not encouraging bad habits on KP. 😛

@seekjustice @rochellaine @catwing

Hi! Sorry for some reason I was not getting the messages.

Perhaps SeekJustice has transferred her ruthlessness to me as well. 😛

@seekjustice @rochellaine @jenwriter17 @catwing

Hey I’ll be around a while.

@jenwriter17  Good talking to you! See you later. 🙂

@jenwriter17  Maybe I’ll try that! Sounds interesting.

Yeah, Minecraft is cool! I haven’t really built much yet; I’m mostly relying on a village for supplies and a place to live. I enjoy fighting the monsters (except the skeletons).

These days, I’m mostly drawing fanart for another game I like. It’s pretty fun. 😛

Aye, I relate. All too well.…[Read more]

@jenwriter17  That’s good! I don’t think I could reach even five thousand words. . .  😛 Life is too hectic.

I’ve been okay. My motivation to work is non-existent and I’ve barely gotten anything done, so it’s been kind of stressful. Other than that, well. . . Nothing huge is happening. I’m drawing a lot, I started playing Minecraft. . . And m…[Read more]

@jenwriter17  Hello! Yep, I’m still on. Are you doing NaNo? (I’m not. . .)

Hey, you’re only ten posts away from two thousand! You’re almost a Chosen One!

@jenwriter17  I don’t think I’ll be on tonight, but we’ll see. I’m still here for now though.

@jenwriter17  @catwing  @seekjustice  @rochellaine  @valtmy

I’ll be writing a bit! Assuming I don’t get distracted, that is. I don’t think I’m ready for a word war, though. 😛

BLUUUUUEE JAAAAYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!! You’re back!!!! *hugs tightly*  I’M SO GLAD TO SEE–

Oh, wait, we haven’t been introduced, haven’t we? Apologies haha. . . I’m Dekreel. I’ve always wondered where you’ve been! It’s great to see you back! Sadly, at this point, most of the Kapeefers have vanished. Deserted this place for Story Embers. Tragic times.…[Read more]

@seekjustice

Ugh. Gross. You’ll get in trouble with regulators if you did that.

Best to conduct training sessions. That way if your customers complain that it was ineffective, you can just say that they simply “did not learn well” or “had insufficient discipline”. 😛