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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 6 years, 9 months ago
‘Most comely he smiled’ is better
And little Teedletiden he fashioned for the trees
For all of these a city, Letharill, he made
Its glory was established that it should never fade[ I’m unsure about the meter in these last three lines, especially lines 1 and 3.]Maybe instead: ‘And little Teedletiden he fashioned for trees
For all t…[Read more]
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 6 years, 9 months ago
@Daeus Thanks.
Well, you’d better come up with an epic soundtrack for it then. 😉
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 6 years, 9 months ago
@Daeus Oh hey, could I have it in a doc too? I was going to do it without one, but that sounds a much more efficient option.
I don’t write poetry, but I certainly appreciate good poetry, especially with good cadence. That’s my favorite part.
I read through it, and it’s beautiful, and I do have some metrical suggestions.
Also, I feel compelled…[Read more]
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic A Year Ago… in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 My pleasure. XD
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic A Year Ago… in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 Yay!!! Congratulations, and may you reap the goodness of KP for many more years. 😉 D’ye remember our first conversation? It was regarding Luke Skywalker and whether or not he’s whiny. XD
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@Dekreel This is great. XD And I agree with @ClaireC, the small installments are nice; makes it easier to read and in one sitting. 😉
@PerfectFifths If you really could cut in perfect fifths that would be quite a feat.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Hi, I'm Ari! in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 9 months ago
@Ariella-Newheart Oh really, good. Paper clips are useful. XD
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Hi, I'm Ari! in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 9 months ago
@Ariella-Newheart Welcome to KP! *throws paper clips at your shield* For the satisfying pinging noise and all.
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Emma Flournoy posted an update 6 years, 9 months ago
Hullo peeps, I have a message from our historic forum doctor, @BlueJay, whom many of you remember but I can’t remember everyone who remembers her plus I’m only allowed ten tags so feel free to tag other people if you want. 😉
I email with her sometimes, hence the message. She says to tell you the forum doctor’s on vacation, and enjoying the hot…[Read more] -
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 9 months ago
@JoiseBeth Welcome to KP! Mere Christianity is great. 😀
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic *waves manically* ;P in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 9 months ago
@GracieGirl They shouldn’t disappoint. 😀
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic The Better Books Survey in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@Daeus I thought Andrew Peterson too—he’s got his own website andrew-peterson.com, and then a community he’s head of, rabbitroom.com, which I think has a large following of writers with the same general worldview of KeePers. Which is nice. And from what I’ve read he seems like a nice personal guy who’s always interested in helping others…[Read more]
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic The Lord of the Rings in the forum Book Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@SeekJustice The Sil is hard to get through in places, but I really think it’s worth it, so don’t put it down after being bored for a few chapters. ;P And you’ll be making quite a bit of use of the maps in it, too. It’s slow going, but there’s some good stuff in it. Whatever order your read the books in.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic The Lord of the Rings in the forum Book Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@SeekJustice Hey, good idea! Good question too, and I’d actually recommend reading LotR first. The Silmarillion is meant more for someone who’s already quite familiar with Tolkien’s world, I think. The books specifically. It won’t make a ton of difference either way though. You’d appreciate both more after having read the other, so there’s not…[Read more]
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Greetings! in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 9 months ago
@Amily-Huddleston Yay for Faramir and Jean Valjean! Two of my all-time favorite characters as well. And Les Miserables is the best. My favorite book.
Welcome to KP! 😀
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic The Better Books Survey in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
OH, just one thing typographically related—no typos that I could see, but on the very first page when you say ‘welcome to the better books survey’, it might be more proper to have it Better Books s(S)urvey, unless you don’t really consider that a proper title.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic The Better Books Survey in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@Daeus Really cool survey. I’m sure any serious readers to get their paws on it will be glad for a chance to rant. And it’ll be really interesting to analyze the results.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic I don't know what I'm asking… in the forum Book Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@WarrioroftheRealm The Count of Monte Cristo is a good historical fiction, with lots of intrigue though it’s not exactly political in nature.
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Jessi Rae replied to the topic Weird Things People Tell Me 'Cause I'm a Writer in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@dekreel Thanks for the tip! 🙂
@jenwriter17 *grins* Isn’t he, though? I like to call him My Preciousss… XD
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Jessi Rae replied to the topic Weird Things People Tell Me 'Cause I'm a Writer in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
@dekreel Not really. I mean, I’ve been planning to look into them after hearing people here on KP talk about them, but I don’t think I was aware of the forums’ existence before I heard them mentioned. *sheepish grin* I’ll hopefully look them up fairly soon.
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Also, @BlueJay said she’s been having a deficit of good ideas for writing lately, and if any of you have any spare good ideas she’d love them. She still gets emails when she’s tagged. Anything’s welcome, but especially ones more on the cute short story side of things. So just in case. 😉
Thanks for tagging me, Emma. How is she doing? I think about her sometimes (and wonder if she ever got my edits for her Golden Conch story?). Tell her hi for me! *waves*
Oh, you edited The Golden Conch too? I didn’t know that. That’s a fun one. 😀 I can ask her if she ever got the edits.
Yeah, I couldn’t remember for sure if you were around when she was but I was pretty sure. 😉
She’s doing well, as far as I know… She recently won best film/best actress awards for a short film she made for a film festival, so…[Read more]
Noice! Do you know if she’ll be coming back to Kingdom Pen sometime?
I don’t know. She said she’d love to sometime, but I don’t really know much about it. We can hope. 😉
Yep. 🙂
Here, her reply to you:
‘ I think so, but I will have to check. I’m still working on it, so if you want to send them through again, I’ll probably still use them. ‘
Okay, I will probably do that. 😉
@emma-flournoy BlueJay is Australian?! Huh! I didn’t know that…
Anyway, now that I know that she still gets emails… Can I pass a message to her?
Hiya, @bluejay! I’m Dekreel! 😀 We haven’t met yet, but I am aware of the circumstances, so oddly enough, I miss you! XD So, when you return, expect a greeting from me like we’d always known each…[Read more]
Thanks Dekreel. *grins* I’m sure she’s loving your enthusiastic response. Thanks for the story ideas too. 😉 I don’t know what she thinks of any of them, but if she says anything about ’em I’ll pass it on. 😉
BlueJay says ‘can’t wait until I get to meet you properly. ‘
😀
Oh, that’s great @emma-flounoy! She was the first person to welcome me, and one of the best friends I’ve ever had here. Please say hi from me, and that I miss her. 🙂 Also I’m glad she’s enjoying the hot weather, ’cause I’m not. 😛
@emma-flournoy.
Heh, I don’t enjoy hot weather either. XD Happily for us it won’t be Summer for quite a bit yet over here.
I’ll definitely tell her. 😀
Thanks, girl. 😉 @emma-flournoy
She says: ‘ I’m missing you too. I’d be happy to email with you if you want. ‘ 😉
Oh good! We were going to exchange emails when she was here, but my mum was ‘thinking about it’ and we missed the opportunitiy. I’ll ask her again. 🙂 @bluejay @emma-flournoy
Great!
Sure thing, I will. 😀 Thanks.
@BLUEJAY !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yesssss, you will get this message! I MISS YOU, girl! It’s hard being substitute doctor around here, especially since there’s so much ice cream going around.
Uh, writing ideas. Right. Do something about puppies. Maybe a man who’s deaf with a dog assistant. From the dog point of view?
Or a story about a…[Read more]
Woah. Um, @bluejay, I think @dragon-snapper just gave you the highest compliment possible for her to give.
An unmelted chair, AND phone, AND chocolate! Impressive!
Yeah, impressive. XD O.K., her message to you, Snapper:
@dragon-snapper *sinks gratefully into chair and types message on phone while eating chocolate* it’s a good life.
I really like the idea about the guide dog from it’s perspective.
I shall have to think about the pizza idea for a bit. 🙂
@Winter-Rose From BlueJay: ‘I like your ideas. Very cute. ‘
Aww, I was just thinking about her the other day. She was the first one who welcomed me when I came on here as a scared little elfling, and it was the warmest greeting ever. Say hello for me. We miss her.
I shall indeed.