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@gracie-j

I love the second one too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  the first one though… ❤❤❤

@gracie-j

Oh. My. Gosh.  GRACIE!!!!!!!!!!!  That is SOOOOO beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  I’m smiling so hard right now that people are gonna ask me what I’m doing, lol!!!!!!!!!!  I cannot believe that–it’s sooooo gorgeous!!!  Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ❤

@gracie-j

Totally! And I’ll try doing some experiments with that 😉 Yeah, this is my first! Technically I wrote a 30,000 word long story about a dog a few years ago, but I don’t think that counts Awww, thank you!! 🙂 That’s super sweet, and I’m very happy to hear the supportive feedback!

@gracie-j

Well, nothing too specific, perhaps about writing scenery and action? But I’m always grateful for any and all tips you have:)

@Abigail-M

YAHOO! So happy you’re looking forward to it! I’m editing it right now 😀

@Gracie-J

Thank you! I’ll try not to have so many indenting errors next time! Haha…

Yay! Thanks!

Ohmygosh YES! I fangirl all the time, so I KNOW the feeling 😉 I’m coming back from a trip tomorrow so it may be busy, but if I have the time, I may post a…[Read more]

@gracie-j

I just finished it! You are definitely a master with descriptions (do you have any tips on them?) The imagery was so clear, I literally saw everything happening scene by scene:)
Awesome job!

@millennium

Wow! Those lines set up the action straight away:) Awesome!

@writerlexi1216

And it is just way too awesome that Newton gets a whole chapter all to himself!! 😀

@writerlexi1216

(*trying to contain excitement but failing miserably*) I AM SO DEFINITELY GOING TO BE ON THE LOOKOUT FOR CHAPTER 2!!! 😀 😀 😀

@Abigail-m

YAY! I’m so stoked you enjoyed it (and that you were hooked! Your feedback is VERY encouraging!) Ahh, that’s fine! I like writing in all caps (and using exclamation points, haha). WOOHOO! That’s SO AMAZING! I’m super happy you like it, and wow, you’re really making me want to share more! I may edit more of Ch. 2 later and try to post…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

That’s awesome!! 😀

@godlyfantasy12

Ooo, YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Congrats!!!!!!!!  Hope you win too 😉

@writerlexi1216

It was SO AMAZING! AND YES! I DEFINITELY WANT TO READ MORE!! Okay, I gotta stop writing in all caps, but I definitely feel like writing in all caps!!!
Seriously though, I’m even more excited to read more of this story than I was when I waited for the second book of one of my favorite series to come out!

And a chapter from…[Read more]