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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 23 hours, 57 minutes ago
Okay! I’m currently waiting for a class to start, but I’ll RP afterwards if Whaley hasn’t yet. =)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day ago
*Nods*
*Is concerned because that’s exactly what Helmer always says*
*Doesn’t know if Helmer drank much tea, but offers it anyway*
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day ago
do you want to go again or are we waiting for @whalekeeper ?
I think for the moment this is more of a Rory/Leo conversation…. but if you think she should RP next that’s fine.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day ago
oh yes!!! Much better! That makes far more sense.
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Koshka replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day ago
Ah, I see. How is this?
“An elf lord who employs orcs.” he straightened to face Travenor. They stared at each other for a long moment while the rest of us stood in suspense. Well, not me. I knew.
“For the love of life!” Travenor spun to kick the body again, eyes flashing steel grey. He stepped across to Onnendel. “It was him.”…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 day ago
haha!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day ago
It’s not so much the words as Onnendel’s reaction. Or the way it was written. If yoy could do this:
“Him!” Travenor spun to kick the body again, eyes flashing steel grey. He stepped across to Onnendel. “It was Him.”
Onnendel did not move. He simply gazed at Travenor with his clouded eyes and a gravity that ache…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 day ago
Awesome!!!!
STOP!!!!!!! Have you eaten Breakfast???
lol. No. I don’t do that until closer to 2:00 in the afternoon………………….
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day ago
Yeah……… unless I do it to Werner.
Also, HUSH! Don’t blow my cover!
I refer to you two as the twins because you’re the only twins I know and…. idk. It’s easier because not everyone knows your real names, and I’d end up slipping and saying them instead of your KP names, so I just call you the twins.
As for Power,…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 day ago
Yeah, I get what you both are saying. I feel like church should be a place where you gather with your family (brothers and sisters in Christ) and if church is leaving you wanting more….. I don’t know. For some reason that feels wrong to me. Maybe not. Maybe I’m just so used to my church that it’s hard to see things d…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 1 hour ago
Erm…….he probably thinks that’s great…..
*Whips around towards door and screams*
Ellette, what have you been saying?!
XD
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Loopylin replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 1 hour ago
AHHH YOU HOPPED ON THE TREND TOOOOO
THIS TREND SLAAAAAAYYYYS ✨
but most of the time they can simply pull moisture from the air and rehydrate.
Mooooost of the time. Except when they’re in the desert. 😁 Or if they get freeze-dried and packaged. (That got dark…)
If a Pitt can’t sing, they can’t control the plants as they do not…
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Loopylin replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 1 hour ago
They don’t have blood, but if cut the wound will spill light that in turn heals it.
That’s some cool concept imagery. 😎
So there are “laws unbreakable” like the cost of reason and the concept of ransom blood which are deep in the fabric of the world.
How does the concept of ransom blood work? What are some of the other unbre…[Read more]
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Loopylin replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 1 hour ago
Literally everyone loves your concept, so you’ve got originality conquered and in the bag, girl. XD
I love it so much but it loves to frustrate me and taunt me with its vagueness. Maybe you guys could help me make it make sense?
Ideas ideas
– An Ink drawing melts away after a certain time limit
– After the artist draws something, they…[Read more]
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Loopylin replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 2 hours ago
Thanks for the debriefing! I’ve read up on these concepts before, but it’s been so long since I focused on them, that I felt you were better able to summarize these things.
Of these, I think effects is actually the least important. Access and costs can both be very important, but cost probably a bit more so.
Definitely agree with this. Any…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 3 hours ago
It’s even funnier that Power is your brother. When I heard that, my heart nearly stopped. Then I burst into hysterical laughter!!!!!! And his age!! That shocked me even more! I think I’ll have to change a few things in Dale’s Kingdom Pen story because I described Power as a teenage boy!!!! In my mind, he seemed to be 14…or 15…I hope…[Read more]
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