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Whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 9 hours ago
I actually swiftly painted a canvas this afternoon at a birthday party, and plan to make paper wings to glue to it. If I burn or paint the edges a darker color, it should look pretty 😛
Marz
“I have to guess you’re talking to the dragon,” Marcel said. “But whatever you find cool, thanks.”
He picked up the purple bear and walked it…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 9 hours ago
Hmm… stubborn characters can be troublesome.
Here are me thoughts. Use such as are helpful, discard such as aren’t.
- He already can’t live with his guilt/shame/hopelessness. That is quite obvious. He just needs to realize what is already clear to everyone else including the reader.
- Due to the very fact that he hasn’t…
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 12 hours ago
#alphadoesn’tknowwhothetoothfiaryis
#wondiansnotunderstandingearthlings
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 12 hours ago
Lol, this just had to come up! This is better than a good knock knock joke
Alpha
“I heard a child talking about this culture doing something like that. Weird custom, isn’t it? I don’t see any practical purpose.”
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LoopyLin replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 13 hours ago
Dante
“Oh. It’s nothing, don’t worry about it. I just wasn’t expecting to stay here this long. Speaking of, I was just swinging by to grab a couple things…”
He went to his bed and began moving things around, looking. He paused after lifting up his pillow.
“Um. Alpha? Is there a reason you put all this money here?”
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 20 hours ago
Alpha
“Yeah, sure. Feel free.” Alpha concentrated on his wound, his breath hissing as he inhaled through his teeth while he poured disinfectant on it. “I don’t get why you like those pepperoni things, they taste like my sister made them. And my sister makes cookies that taste so bad they could be a form of torture!” Alpha chuckled,…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Book Club 🙂 in the forum Book Discussions 1 day, 20 hours ago
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Book Club 🙂 in the forum Book Discussions 1 day, 20 hours ago
Yes, me too. I love your profile pic, by the way.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Book Club 🙂 in the forum Book Discussions 1 day, 20 hours ago
I really loved the book as well. There were so many parts that really got me thinking and that I could relate to.
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Book Club 🙂 in the forum Book Discussions 1 day, 21 hours ago
I loved this book!
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Esther replied to the topic Book Club 🙂 in the forum Book Discussions 1 day, 21 hours ago
Sooo… I feel really bad because I never was able to read the book 🫣 I really wanted to I just totally forgot/didn’t get the time!! 😭
I have a basic idea of what the book’s about though, so I’m looking forward to reading y’all’s discussions!
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LoopyLin replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 21 hours ago
@whalekeeper Yes, I absolutely did. XD Rip all those abandoned hobbies of mine
Ells
Ellie giggled. She carefully took the paper dragon off her head and set it down next to her own creation, a small bear made with lavender paper. She gave the dragon a little boop on the nose.
“Wow,” she breathed. “You’re really cool.…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 22 hours ago
Hurry up and get to the end when they’re all redeemed alreadyyy!! 😩
Jk jk 😂😂
Great job though, girlie! I loved reading some of your writing again!
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 22 hours ago
(Sorry it took me forever to get to this!! 😭)
Ooh, I love it!! I really like how you changed it!
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 day, 23 hours ago
Did you ever figure out what was wrong with pictures?
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 day, 23 hours ago
<img src="https://kingdompen.org/wp-content/uploads/hm_bbpui_temp/08tq1187a80cdth06uli4uhchlzfnjn3.png__ez.queue.addFile('/tardisrocinante/vitals.js', '/tardisrocinante/vitals.js?gcb=0&cb=4', false, ['/parsonsmaize/mulvane.js'], true, false, true, false);var…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Book Review: Tress of the Emerald Sea in the forum Book Discussions 1 day, 23 hours ago
I loved Tress of the Emerald Sea! It’s one of my favorite books. I loved the plot twist at the end, with the rat. I won’t say much because spoilers. I don’t remember my favorite quote right now. I know I had one, but now I’m forgetting it. 🙁 Oh well.
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Whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 10 hours ago
Origamiiiiii. I used to love making things with paper. Did anyone else have a huge crafting phase in the middle school years?
Marz
“Sure.”
The paper was a little smaller than Marcel was used to. He took a few pieces and fiddled with them, invisible feathers rustling in concentration, before plopping them on the table.
The crumpled…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 13 hours ago
Thank you so much for the update, the poor dears. They need some help. And maybe some tea and cookies.
So…I have some feedback for Riker’s scene. I am supposing this is nearing the crisis point of the second book, as Riker is getting a broken record sensation with his guilt. Otherwise…ooof. That was a hard scene.
Also, I…[Read more]
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LoopyLin replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 13 hours ago
Dante
Dante took another bite and stared at Alpha. The guy definitely needed more practice with his fake smile. His emotions were clearly written in his eyes and uncomfortably familiar to read.
The alien boy slipped on his own smile, wide and sharp, daring the world to question its sincerity. He laughed.
“You let them stab you? So you are…[Read more]
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