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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Maybe Leon and Riker (prob esp Leon) while in the USA have both been avoiding people, places, things, etc. that trigger their PTSD, but with the return to Germany it brings a lot of things back and they both have to work through those things that yeah, haven’t healed yet
But both of my Boys are stubborn and don’t like to admit where they’re…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
I really do understand what you mean about external conflict though
Def the 1st book had the conflict with all of the war things, all of the antagonists, resistance, etc
The 2nd book has external conflict mostly involving tension between people, alcoholism (for Leon), fights, acted upon hatred, etc
Like how in the second book,…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle I’ve actually heard a lot of authors say internal is harder, and I don’t understand it 😂 External is sooooo much harder for me. It wasn’t as hard in the 1st book, but Hans was a huge contributor to that
lol, you’re good. Ik you don’t know my book as well, so you’re fine XD Def noted what you said about external…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle Oh my goodness!!!! 😍😍 I love him!!!!!!!!! Ty so much!!! <3
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freedom posted a new activity comment 2 years, 2 months ago
It’s fairly simple but maybe a little fancy photograph cover and very eye catching.
And girlllll, the Blurb Amazon wrote based off of the one I wrote and sent them🤩🤩 it is absolutely fabulous. Both of my parents and someone here on KP I shared it with all agree it sounds so freaking amazing 🎉🤩 -
freedom replied to the topic Character doodles in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Mmmmm
Aragorn from Lord of the Rings is currently stuck in my head 😂👀
You could draw him if you wantedOr I can pick one of my charries. But Aragorn is 💯 stuck in my head rn😂
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freedom posted an update 2 years, 2 months ago
I have the final cover designs *rubs hands together* Things are happening, y’all
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Oooh, is it an artsy cover or a fancy photography cover? Simple? Complex? XD
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It’s fairly simple but maybe a little fancy photograph cover and very eye catching.
And girlllll, the Blurb Amazon wrote based off of the one I wrote and sent them🤩🤩 it is absolutely fabulous. Both of my parents and someone here on KP I shared it with all agree it sounds so freaking amazing 🎉🤩-
Niiiice, congrats!! 😘 Keep it up, and just picture that cover whenever you’re tired of the process.
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Sweeeetttt! Can’t wait to BUY your book!!!!!!!!
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Ty so much, girl!!! 💖💖 I can’t wait until everyone gets to read it 👀✨🥰
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Long story short, External conflict is not my forte. I much more prefer internal conflict😂
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@whalekeeper Ty for the ideas, girlie 💖
The ideas for Leon are def more for his 2nd book
Tho he still struggles with grief, remaining pain, and still his PTSD (Riker also still wrestles with PTSD, both from the camp and from his abused childhood🫠😅), he’s left the vengeance behind, leaving the men that harmed him in God’s hands
and as for Riker,…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle Yw! 💖
and of course. How could I not use the Riker you drew as my new pfp?🥰🥰
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freedom replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
the guy on the right (D) of this image is wearing an outfit similar to what I imagine for Leon, just different colors, but it’s black and white, so😂
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freedom replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle Yep, he’s Jewish married to a German woman👀
and I absolutely understand. facial hair is hard!!! Hang on. Lemme see if I can get a couple references for his beard
Ok, so kinda a beard like this👇

and I posted a few other reference pics above😉
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freedom replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Y’all are all so talented ✨✨
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freedom replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago

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freedom replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago

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freedom replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Reference pics (1 picture at a time, sadly. KP doesn’t like more than 1 photo🙄)

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freedom replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Name: Leon Jedediah Wagner
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Clothing: White button up undershirt; dark tan or light brown vest, dark brown 1940s era overcoat with a WW2 Star of David stitched onto the left breast of the coat (with the word Jude in the middle; the German word for Jew). Tan or brown pants. prob a brown tie.
Time period…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle Oooh 👀 I may ask for Riker & Iris a little later…but I’d like to ask for Leon 🥰
give me a couple mins and I’ll send a description
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@whalekeeper You’re fine. Totally understand <3 Take all the time you need! 💖
Okay cool! I’ve known about the internal conflict, since you focus a lot on those two struggles in your posted scenes. What about the physical conflict/action they’re dealing with? Like what are they doing in Germany/USA? Is there some antagonistic force they work aga…
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Niiiice, congrats!! 😘 Keep it up, and just picture that cover whenever you’re tired of the process.